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Does it need to be changed? Is it too flashy? Too happy? Seriously. Because a lot of people are going to be looking at it.
 
I think it's really cute that somebody who seems so stoic as you made something so happy and upbeat!
But in all seriousness. My suggestion is to maybe throw in a fourth, cooler color to balance it all out. The bright colors are nice, but maybe a splash of dark here and there to give the eye a rest. It's a bit overwhelming. Throw in a complementary color.
 
ok i gave it another look

the only thing i might suggest is that the reflection could be overwhelming? i usually like them but in that one it feels a little "whoa"
might be just me tho
 
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I'll try to make it a bit darker in a bit (Need to go through the PSD file and change some things around). Is that better?
 
Does it need to be changed? Is it too flashy? Too happy? Seriously. Because a lot of people are going to be looking at it.

I feel like it doesnt really look like a title though...
As lovely as it looks, it doesn't exactly 'grab' my attention.
It reminds me more of a signature...
Just like mayor lark said, it seems like the color scheme is a bit overwhelming.
At first glance its kind of hard to focus on because its so bright.
But overall, it does look nice :)
 
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That certainly helps! I think you should maybe throw in a few more blues. The spots I think is the most important to put a cool color in is the bottom left corner. It's what introduces the image, and the eye naturally follows in a left to right direction when it is viewed. (I take design at my school)

Again, just suggestions!!


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Also, Swift is right. You should make the image a little wider, so it looks more like a title.
 
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Darkened it a bit. And yeah. I do think it's a bit too flashy. Looks more like a signature than a banner.
 
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Darkened it a bit. And yeah. I do think it's a bit too flashy. Looks more like a signature than a banner.

Yes, looks much better!
Perhaps contrast/ the 'S' a bit more?
Then it would be super perfect. The s still seems to be blending in a bit?
Dunno.
(Heh sorry. Extremely picky about these things.)
 
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You know what? No. I can do better. I'll just do another banner. This one? Too flashy.
 
You know what? No. I can do better. I'll just do another banner. This one? Too flashy.

<3 I trust that whatever you make, it will look great. Maybe you could make a couple of mockups and see how they all look before deciding what the final version would look like? We could give input as well!
 
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