Yes, another "I need critique" thread.....

[Abela]

i just figured I should stick to what I know best: playing AC, playing piano, and eating Yeah so.....I just figured out what a "chibi" is today and I was like "OMG those are sooooo cute" and I picked up a crappy dollar store pencil and started scribbling! So I don't know if this is considered chibi..... So I was wondering if anyone would like to give me a little criticism! Just some quick notes: I am not fishing for compliments, I just was wondering if someone could help me out. I KNOW it's bad! And although it's very nice of people to tell me it looks great I'd rather you just be honest. I'm also not trying to be professional, this is more a hobbie that I'd like to improve on if anything. I'm probably not going to be pilling off shading and highlighting. My sister's a fancy artist who goes to a fancy college who does fancy art. I'm never going to be like her! And one more thing: you can price it if you'd like but I'm not going to be opening up a shop anytime soon!

 

[Locket]

Make the lines darker is first
You Need To Work On Antomy!

I see a lot of areas you need to work on, that I can't explain.

 

[Abela]

Make the lines darker is first
You Need To Work On Antomy!

I see a lot of areas you need to work on, that I can't explain.

Haha thanks! I knew the lines were going to come out bad! I'll definitely work on it!

 

[Tinkalila]

I would try making the torso a little shorter or the legs a little longer. In real life, my upper thigh is approximately the same as the length from my neck to my hips. Although you're doing chibis, and real life anatomy does not always apply, I think it's something good to keep in mind. When I first started drawing, I only wanted to draw anime, and when I was advised to draw from life, I made the mistake of saying that anime is completely different. But now I have found that, regardless of style, having an understanding of anatomy will be an immense help! Good luck!