• Weird card fortunes lol I dunno why I even found a set in the back of my family's bookshelf but WHY NOT?
    I know, I know...I'm so bored with limited technology, I've even tried doing tarot because I was bored lmao
    idk what you have planned for them but maybe you could incorporate them into Ink Blade by have a dual perspective?? It might help break up the monotony since the current chapters are like 80% Kirrin doing stuff. It might not work though, depending on what their story is
    Hmm, I like lots of dialogue, as long as there's description to go along with it. imo it's more bleak to just read about how one character did this and that and also that (not that you do that). :3 Oh, and I also noticed that sometimes you have no italicized words for a looong time and then there's like 3 in one sentence. idk if that's intentional or not though?

    Oh, and are Leihi and the character in your avatar going to appear in the story? :3 And when are you going to update?? I need more lol o.o
    Hmm I like Kirrin a lot! :D I noticed that sometimes instead of showing other characters dialogue you just summarize it (like bob told me he likes pickles instead of "I like pickles," said bob) so that kind of takes away from the other character's personalities. :/ It's still awesome though! asdfghjkl; i'm so jealous of people who are good at writing ;_;

    oh right, I'll get to those when I'm on my computer! :3
    hfaoihwfoihwfoih
    i had a computer be practically destroyed by me via downloads for sims so i've become super paranoid since lol
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