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Here are the rules:
1. ANYTHING CAN HAPPEN--as long as it's not inappropriate.
2. Each "story" concludes on the 20th post. To keep track post the number on the top of your response.
3. Responses should be at least 3 sentences long to give the next person something to go off of; at the same time, it's probably best to keep away from writing several paragraphs worth for a response.

Guess I'll start!

Entry 1:
Janie knew she wasn't supposed to play with fire. Her mother had always told her so. Fascinated, she watched the candlelight flicker. She blew at it gently and the little flame danced for a moment. Fire was really pretty.
 
Entry 2: Her mom saw her delight in watching the fire. Concerned, her mother said "Now Janie, you remember what I've always told you, right? Don't you be playing with fire. You will hurt yourself." Janie pretended to listen and wandered away from the flame and sat on the couch. Feeling trustful of Janie's actions, her mother walked into the kitchen away from Janie to make lunch. Now was her chance.
 
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Entry 3: Despite her mother's warnings, she walked up to the candle, prepared to touch the dancing flame. It seemed to pull her in, inviting her to touch it... and she did just that. When she touched it, her finger began to burn, causing her to scream loudly. "AAAAAGHGHH! IT BURNS, IT BURNS!" It hurt a lot more than it would hurt anybody else, but she didn't know that, so as she burned, she assumed it just hurt this much.
 
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Entry 4: Suddenly.. The fire began to spread to the rest of her body, and she screamed in agony. Now it was completely engulfed in flames. Janie, however, did not feel a thing after a couple seconds. She wondered why she was suddenly immune to this flame, then a strange mark appeared on her wrist.
 
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Entry 5: Janie's mother shouted out "Are you okay, Janie?" Janie guessed she was so she replied back "Yeah" she saw the scar on her wrist so she checked her body for scars, all of a sudden flames shot out of her fingers, she waved her hands around and got them to stop. She carefully started them again and by concentrating she got them under control and to stop at her will.
 
Entry 6: Janie's eyes widened as the flames stopped and flared at her will. She heard her mother's footsteps come in, and quickly hid her wrist behind her back. Her mother came in, and stared at Janie.

"What were you screaming about?" she asked.
 
entry 7:Jamie's mother (who is 59) walked downstairs (she was getting ready for her date ;) ) the door bell rung, a handsome 19 year old boy walked in. Wearing a suit and hair slicked back. Hey are you Concreta? Jamie mom smiled. Yes that's my name, are you here for our date? Yes Concreta I am :)
 
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Entry 8: Janie was shocked that her mother would start dating so soon after her father died only months ago. Janie was enraged by the fact that her mother moved on so quickly. Her mother told her date to wait by door while she grabbed her purse, and Janie glared at her mothers date. She was disgusted, and concentrated on him. Moments later, the man was engulfed in flames.
 
Entry 9: Janie's mother, Estelle, who was mortified at the sight of her boyfriend in flames, screamed in agony as she rushed to call 911. Estelle tried to choke out the words to the police, but her crying was too powerful. Her boyfriend fell to the floor as the flames started to spread to the entire house. Janie did nothing but stand there and watch as a wide, evil grin spread across her face.
 
Sniped .^.

Entry 11: Suddenly Estelle changed back to a human. "Eek, what's happening??" she shrieked. She was going back and forth suddenly, violently changing from a person into a unicorn again, then to a bear and back.
 
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Entry 12: Estelle realised it was all a dream. She got out of bed, and checked on her daughter.
Estelle looked at her daughter's peaceful expression. But... her... her daughter still had that mark on her wrist. She wondered.. .what happened to her child..
 
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Entry 13: She shook her head, thinking, No, it's just a dream, I'm sleepwalking, I'll pinch myself and I'll wake up...

And so she did. She pinched her face and rubbed it, then closed her eyes. She stared at Janie again. The mark was still there. Suddenly, a small prick of flames sprouted from Janie's hand.
 
Entry 15:

Or so was thought, but far away in a very small town, there was a girl. She was frightened and all alone. She was hiding, covered in dirt and starving. Her name is Olive. She had big bright green eyes, unlike any other. Her orange hair, when clean, flowed long and beautiful. Right now, it was matted and filthy. All she could do was hope and wish that someone could come and save her, from the creatures outside. Suddenly, Janie appeared before her flames blazing from her hands, and Olive screamed in shock and horror.
 
entry 16:

Janie lit Olive's house on fire and locked her in. Janie was quite proud of her work; craving more mayhem, she flew to a rural mountain side to...
 
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