FANTASY RP | Mahou Acadamy | OPEN & NEW

[Ghost Soda]

Didn't you say you weren't joining? I don't want to be rude, but pestering people about their forms in a roleplay you aren't even going to be a part of isn't the most productive thing. The admins of the roleplay will decide whether or not the forms are good quality or need need tweaking.

That being said, sometimes you need to see a character in action to judge whether they are a Mary Sue/Gary Stu. If we assumed that all characters with good qualities were going to god-mod all over the place, not much would get done.

Nah, no rudeness. I will join, but I felt I should comment on her character first.

True, but characters should still start out with some good flaws, but that's just my 2 cents.

 

[Taka]

Nah, no rudeness. I will join, but I felt I should comment on her character first.

True, but characters should still start out with some good flaws, but that's just my 2 cents.

Ah, looking forward to your form then. We will take your opinion into account when deciding who gets in.

I can understand that, but we can't be too harsh on that aspect of the form unless a user had left absolutely no room for flaws and it was incredibly obvious that they had no intention of giving their character any.

 

[itai]

@Bluewolf​

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You are accepted!

@MayorEvvie I agree with Ghostsoda, your character is almost flawless. everybody in the world lies, unless one of their powers is that
they can't, but that's not the case, so try fixing up your character a bit.

@MayorBambie There is very little info on your characters, try adding more so we know what she is like.

@Zelrom sorry, we must decline.​

 

[himeki]

Edited my app~

 

[MayorBambie]

I've edited my application.

 

[itai]

@MayorEvvie accepted

@MayorBambie accepted​

 

[himeki]

Yay, thank you @itai !
When will we start? :3
EDIT: Oh, is there any limit on use of swears? Just wanted to check beforehand~

 

[itai]

uh, i prefer not to have swearing but very occasional cussing is allowed


I was gonna start now but lolipup and ethre haven't replied, so we'll wait for them​

 

[Ghost Soda]

Username: Ghost Soda
Character Name: Edan Jones
Age: 17, BD on March 29th
Gender: Male
Powers(up to three): Has the ability to turn into a dragon. He also has the ability to breathe fire and is immune to being burned by it, human form or otherwise.
Personality: Edan is outgoing and likes making friends with the people around him. He's very talkative and agreeable to those around him and sometimes being a doormat. He's not easy to anger and even when he is angry, he'll hide it as he was taught from a young age not to get angry easily as it makes his powers hard to control. When angry he'll try to keep himself calm and if he can't then he'll be silent. He's also apologetic and loves being active and his favorite hobby being dancing and singing. He's at times tactless and can be overly friendly.
Appearance:

Spoiler

 

[MayorBambie]

Yay! Thanks for accepting me.

 

[himeki]

Are lolipup and ethre rping too?

 

[Ghost Soda]

Are lolipup and ethre rping too?

Well, Lolipup is offline, dunno about Ethre.

 

[Bubblegum K.K]

Is it too late for me to join?

 

[Taka]

Is it too late for me to join?

We haven't started yet, so I think you're safe. x3

 

[ethre]

Ah!! I've picked a character, I'm just have trouble on writing up my application - sorry for the delay!! </3 I'll make one tonight ~ Ah, Itai, your inbox is full </3

 

[Bubblegum K.K]

Ok, then

Username: Bubblegum K.K
Character name: Yumi Nakamura
Age:14{12/30/00}
Gender:Female
Powers(up to three): She has the telekinesis, aka moving stuff with her mind, and teleportation.
Personality: Yumi is extremely smart, and is a tech whiz. Sadly, she also has a bit of a temper. She is often found playing computer games in her room. Yumi often speaks in slang words, and text slang, like LOL, and TTYL. She's a bit of a loner, and prefers the company of her favorite video game.
Appearance:
This is my edited version of my character.

 

[Lolipup]

Itaiiii your inbox is full~~ <3

I asked if I was allowed to make a teacher ;o

 

[himeki]

Ok, guess my question was answered!

 

[itai]

so sorry everyone, I have cleared my inbox ;w;;​

 

[itai]

When ethre and Lolipup post their forms, we'll start!​