Help/Critique?

[Rei Kisaragi]

OK so, lately I've been feeling demotivated to draw.. Because I see lot's of great artists and since i'm pretty inexpeirianced with digital art, i'm pretty bad and I just want to get better.
I think mostly on colouring and eyes.

So... Could anybody help me out? Advice/Tips/Tutorials are all apriciated! (all so critique and advice/tips to do with this piece specifically is all so appriciated ^^)

on this peice -

 

[Ashtot]

its not bad, its pretty simple so there isnt much to say but i think the face in general could use some work, specifically the chin and mouth, but not bad

 

[EtchaSketch]

Here's a tip:
Never color in with black. Always use a very dark shade of grey.
Also, don't make the outline lighter than the color;
For example, the way you did the dress and collar thing

Edit:
I also noticed the highlights in the hair. There's a little bit too many. The peachy color in the hair makes it look like it's reflecting off of her skin! :0

 

[FruitsChinpoG]

Hmm, your lines are pretty sharp and rigid. I wish I could give you tips on how to improve on that, but I'm not an artist, I'm sorry ;A;
Nevertheless, I've seen your art steadily improving and I wish the best of luck to you, it can only get better from here on out! ୧། ☉ ౪ ☉ །୨

 

[Rei Kisaragi]

its not bad, its pretty simple so there isnt much to say but i think the face in general could use some work, specifically the chin and mouth, but not bad

Yeah, my hands are very shakey so it's pretty hard to make the lines straight.

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Here's a tip:
Never color in with black. Always use a very dark shade of grey.
Also, don't make the outline lighter than the color;
For example, the way you did the dress and collar thing

Edit:
I also noticed the highlights in the hair. There's a little bit too many. The peachy color in the hair makes it look like it's reflecting off of her skin! :0

Okay c:
That's actually the style that I did, the peachy colour in the hair is actually low opacity of the sking colour.

 

[riummi]

dont let it get you down ;-; i've felt the same way but just think about how you can keep improving and eventually become a great artist too!

 

[Rei Kisaragi]

Hmm, your lines are pretty sharp and rigid. I wish I could give you tips on how to improve on that, but I'm not an artist, I'm sorry ;A;
Nevertheless, I've seen your art steadily improving and I wish the best of luck to you, it can only get better from here on out! ୧། ☉ ౪ ☉ །୨

I replied to someone else that my hands are shakey, so I do quick strokes to try and make them straight insted of tracing the rough sketch completely.
Ty -?-

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dont let it get you down ;-; i've felt the same way but just think about how you can keep improving and eventually become a great artist too!

Aww Ty c: (I love your art so this is nice coming from you <3)