Help me with my big project, please ; v ; edited lineart

[Keitara]

Yeahhh they must have eagle eyes *u* Huehuehueee

Aww but you should! D: Otherwise gimme it in a png and I'll color it LOL!
Oooo sounds nice And lovely x3

I'll color it definitely haha! But I want to check out many possibilities before I finish it and I'm scared that I won't be able to color nicely :/ But I'll give my best ^^
I'm so bad at coming up with names haha

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speaking of yamio coloring, pls check out pemiin's

thank you for the tip, I checked it out! Her coloring is really good and very cute! Couldn't find any tutorials though, but I watched a speedpaint and found out that she colors with air brush and blur, which I found very interesting since that's kinda very unusual, but I might try something like this out too!

 

[Money Hunter]

Thank youu!
btw I was wondering, is it noticable that she is a long-hair cat? ; o ;

Oh... I guess that's true, I've heard before that it's hard to learn German for foreigners because it has many (unnecessary xD) additions, changes and extraordinary stuff... but learning Korean would be just as difficult for me haha

I guess so, haha

 

[Mewmewmewm]

Yoooo I'm here if thats cool ;u;
If you still want critique then read this but if not you can ignore this part XD
first off I'm really happy to see that you've improved and you have a very positive attitude about drawing~ keep on keeping on girl!
From a design standpoint it's a little bit cludered. Try not to give a charcter too many accesories or if they do have a lot of accesories as part of the design try to focus on certain things so it's not too much to take in. Also I would suggest you try making the kitty ears (i think they're kitty ears, sorry if I got it wrong!) a little bit bigger and more noticeable. That's just me personally though~
As for the anatomy I feel like the legs are a weebit too skinny for the body shape implied by the torso and dress. You don't have to give her thunder thighs or anything but I might suggest making them a little more thicker. Also the girl's mouth is in kind of an odd shape.
As for the painting style you want, it all starts with your lineart. I really like the quality of the lineart and the nice smooth lines you have. For future reference though i would try to make the hair a little less 'strandy'. Try to work in 'chunks' of hair and then add more chunks on top to give more depth (wow that made no sense XD). Currently, the hair could use a little more direction. Also for a more painted style, i would suggest maybe using less lines. Now obviously use all the outlines you need for coloring, but painted styles don't really mirror manga styles. Manga is usually in black in white, and it usually isn't colored. It might help if you make the lineart a little more concise~
as for coloring tutorials I would recommend Yamio's tutorials on youtube. She talks a lot about choosing color and she has pallette's on her DA here:http://www.deviantart.com/art/Tutorial-FREE-to-use-Palette-519927429
Here's some others by different artist's so you can do whichever you want~!
http://www.deviantart.com/art/Simple-Coloring-Tutorial-Part-1-508094271
Explaination on layer modes:http://www.deviantart.com/art/Tutorial-Paint-Tool-Sai-Different-Layer-Options-517055300
http://www.deviantart.com/art/Hair-Coloring-Tutorial-524274990
http://www.deviantart.com/art/Hair-coloring-tutorial-457786472
Also you can try the multiply trick (I use it a lot XD). Change your sai file to a png file using the save as. . . Button, copy the one layer, and set it to multiply with about 50% opacity. It makes your colors much more vivid.

So all in all I think your definetly on your way! Keep up the good work!Let's both improve together~!
Oh my god this is long i'm sorry ;A;