the portrait looks amazing, holy fukc. i dont suggest taking my advice too seriously considering i study more towards cartoons instead of portraits, but everything looks perfect. it's just the face -- i'd move her left eye more to the left. if she's facing directly forward, then the right eyebrow should be a bit longer (unless she's raising her eyebrow). it just looks a bit more curved than the eyebrow on the left - if that was intentional then ignore this part. i'd make her lips pop out a little more too if that makes sense