Making a Song, "Untangle Your Brain" - JUST A FEW MORE, PLEASE ~

[Luminescence]

This looks really fun and cute, but I suck at both rhyming and songs, so have a friendly bump. ♥

 

[KainAronoele]

Bump

 

[Beary]

almost nothing can ease the pain
delt by the falling acid rain

 

[KainAronoele]

One more pair of lines and I'll get started on it.

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If you don't untangle you're brain,
You are lame.

Fyi I worked very hard on this to make sure it rhymed. Please credit if you want to use xoxox

You are silly, that doesn't rhyme ya trolling dork.

 

[pillow bunny]

One more pair of lines and I'll get started on it.

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You are silly, that doesn't rhyme ya trolling dork.

Wow that was rude
Remove from your brain that bad attitude

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oops that one was also supposed to not rhyme

 

[KainAronoele]

Bump

 

[LaBelleFleur]

I'm not very good at these sorts of things. >.<

Your chains can't hold me back,
Because my mind will set me free.

I couldn't think of any good rhymes...

 

[KainAronoele]

I'm not very good at these sorts of things. >.<

Your chains can't hold me back,
Because my mind will set me free.

I couldn't think of any good rhymes...

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P.S.: Somehow thinking of lyrics reminded me of this song? Haha I don't even know.

o .o Uhhh xD

 

[LaBelleFleur]

o .o Uhhh xD

I just have brains on the brain, LOL.

 

[Money Hunter]

I'm not very good at these sorts of things. >.<

Your chains can't hold me back,
Because my mind will set me free.

I couldn't think of any good rhymes...

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P.S.: Somehow thinking of lyrics reminded me of this song? Haha I don't even know.

what did i just watch

 

[KainAronoele]

I just have brains on the brain, LOL.

OH, makes sense xDD