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Propaganda Man

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ok 1st, make speech bubbles so you can actually READ what it sais, and second of all pristina is nearly impossible to read in small font sizes , use a different font.
 
...please stop -__-

seriously... its not a good story line, horrible dialogue, and my eyes are falling out from trying to read it... plus, no action... its them standing there talking.


yes, sad truth.
 
it is the irst one, and this is not just a sprite comic, not all comics have to have action, and I have to build a story :| I am still working them out. Seeing the best way to make it.
 
BAMBAM! said:
it is the irst one, and this is not just a sprite comic, not all comics have to have action, and I have to build a story :| I am still working them out. Seeing the best way to make it.
well, i'll be blunt. thats not a good way to set up a story... for this kind of comic you want action, danger, and things like that... not just 2 guys standing there talking.
 
3 but..I see where you are getting at, most of the comics at NSider are just random stuff. I am trying to show them you can have a sotry to a comic, and this takes off an RPG, so it does kind of get slow at first


:p
 
The irony draws from the fact that you think you're a FE fan when really you haven't even played the entire games...

And if this is a test, why are you posting it?
 
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