Need comments/critics

[Zero_13]

Comments and Critics are appreciated.

I still have the PSD, so I can still edit stuff.

 

[Kiro]

Well it is pretty good. But the text is sort of hard to read.

 

[dragonflamez]

The text pulled a....invisible person.

 

[Grawr]

I think the render and the backround blend too well...It took me a bit to even figure out who the character was (and where the character was)...

 

[SL92]

A bit simple... the text is, as dragonflamez said, pulled an invisible person. The red over the render= :barf:

 

[Kiro]

The text pulled a....invisible person.

Hudini.


:huh:

 

[Kyle]

I can barely even know whats in it.