Owln's Legend

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Wretched Wednesday 11:39 PM November 22, 2004
Posted by Owln on October 22, 2006 - 02:50 PM.

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It was dark out, and I just got home from buying this book, a simple journal. Yes, a journal, not a diary! If you must call it a diary so be it. I got this for a birthday present, as I turned 14, and am ready to move out to Animal Crossing, a wonderous country. I hopped on the train where some wierd cat wouldn't shutup. Owls can't stand daylight, and this was even more painful. I got of the train and came out to a place called Bell Lake. It was in Bell Tree county. I searched around the village looking for my house when a nosy human hit me with a net!!! Why would a human have such anger at me to hit me with a net?!?! He then talked to me... I gave him my name. Then he pushed me into a pitfall, hit me with a net 17 times, and when I turn around, he ran to a eagle, Apollo, and gave him a waterfall of kindness. Humans, you can't understand them, filthy mammals. I found my house and walked inside. It was bigger than a typical hut a human starts out with but I was joyed. But there was a unfortunate reason why I got one bigger than a hut; bugs. I hate bugs, too! It also turned out there was a crack in the wall, a leak on the roof, and a soot-filled chimney. Oh how I hate that Bob Cook. He then comes along and asks me to pay 50,000 bells. I miss my mommy oh so much. Its nearing midnight and I guess I got to unpack while all the other animals sleep, and unlike my town full of owls, I got to get used to daylight, as that is when all the stuff happens. Perhaps I will get that Kyle back?

~ Owln
 
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Bio of Owln;
Age: 14
Sex: Male
Acre: A-1
Orgin: Hoo Haven
Family: Glutto (Uncle), Celeste (Cousin), Blathers (Cousin)
Other: The rest of the family has been killed or missing as of the raid of Hoo Haven. The town owed a secret organization of foxes (guess a fox who sells stuff is incorperated with this organization) and was raided of all valueables. Most owls fleed with their flying abilities, but, some did not make it.
 
Wow, that's fantastic. It's really good how you've made it sound so regal but one bit confused me.


It was dark out, and I just got home from buying this book, a simple journal. Yes, a journal, not a diary! If you must call it a diary so be it. I got this for a birthday present, as I turned 14, and am ready to move out to Animal Crossing, a wonderous country.

First you say you bought the journal, then you say you got it as a birthday present. That's my only problem. Other than that, I think you're a fantastic writer. Well done.
 
WishyTheStar said:
Wow, that's fantastic. It's really good how you've made it sound so regal but one bit confused me.


It was dark out, and I just got home from buying this book, a simple journal. Yes, a journal, not a diary! If you must call it a diary so be it. I got this for a birthday present, as I turned 14, and am ready to move out to Animal Crossing, a wonderous country.

First you say you bought the journal, then you say you got it as a birthday present. That's my only problem. Other than that, I think you're a fantastic writer. Well done.
If you mean 'you' as in Owln, then yes he got it mixed up.

And I think that not all Owls are the smartest of animals.

But I will make something clear; he could have bought the book with the money the parents of Owln bought him OR anything else that will let your decision make. There will be lots of desicion making in this story, as it is a legend, not a story, and so be it as a legend that not all legends are told fully.

That is why I confused you there.
 
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