CaliNewLeaf
Fauna ♡
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Review my WattPad Story?
- Thread starter CaliNewLeaf
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Nice! But there are some mistakes. For example, you shouldn't use "..." so much, and character dialouge should end with a comma instead of a period, like this:
"Nice story," said Bowie.
Everything seems cool other than that. Also, something that took me a very long while to discover was that every piece of character dialouge requires its own paragrapth, unless everything in the paragrapth is spoken by the same person.
"Nice story," said Bowie.
Everything seems cool other than that. Also, something that took me a very long while to discover was that every piece of character dialouge requires its own paragrapth, unless everything in the paragrapth is spoken by the same person.
CaliNewLeaf
Fauna ♡
thank you bowie!
