Something I Wrote

[kierraaa-]

Never say I love you
If you really don't care
Never talk about feelings
If they aren't really there
Never hold my hand
If you are gonna break my heart
Never say your gonna finish
If you don't plan to start
Never look into my eyes
If all you do is lie
Never say hi
If you really mean goodbye
If you really mean forever,
Then say you will try,
Never say forever
Cause forever makes me Cry
-Kierra

 

[kalinn]

i love it

 

[kierraaa-]

i love it

Thanks, ;]

 

[Ricano]

Awesomeness =D

 

[kierraaa-]

Awesomeness =D

Thanks,
Lol

 

[Marcus]

10/10, you've really improved from your last "suicide" one lol.

 

[Josh]

Nice, But it goes out of tune near the middle, or is it just me?

 

[Shiny]

Nice, But it goes out of tune near the middle, or is it just me?

I noticed it too. It was very, very good until the last several lines. I mean, it was still good, but if you had kept the same rhyming pattern throughout the whole thing it would have been that much better.

 

[kierraaa-]

@sermantopp: Thanks, Lol
@The JJ: Thanks,
@Shiny:Thanks!

 

[lightningbolt]

Nice, you HAVE Improved.

 

[kierraaa-]

Nice, you HAVE Improved.

Thanks,!

 

[coffeebean!]

Reminds me of me and my ex, lawl
Niiiice poem ^-^

 

[kierraaa-]

Reminds me of me and my ex, lawl
Niiiice poem ^-^

My ex was the inspiration of this poem
xD
And thanks,!

 

[John102]

Hmm, it's good, I was actually singing it instead of reading it.

 

[merinda!]

@ John LOLOLOL.

Nice poem.
:-]

 

[kierraaa-]

Hmm, it's good, I was actually singing it instead of reading it.

I tried that didn't quite work out xD
Thanks,!

@Emerald.: Thanks,