Super Smash Bros: Tournament Chronicles

[Sonicdude41]

Prologue: A sunny day on the beaches of Isle Delfino. The whole town is abundant with peace and happiness until...

Chapter 1: Set Sights For A New Quest!
KEEEEERRPOOOOOOW!!!!!
*Ground shakes*
Mario: Wow! What was that?
Yoshi: jfiesldkdie (Wow! What the heck was that?!?!?)
Peach: My goodness! What was that???
Toadsworth: I'm too old for this!!
*Asteroid grows legs and walks towards Peach, Yoshi, Mario, and Toadsworth*
Unknown Voice: Mario, Peach, Yoshi, and Toadsworth!! You four have been selected to participate in a tournament called Super Smash Bros.!! If you win tournament, you will receive a prize beyond your wildest imagination.
Mario: Who are you? And how do you know our names?
Yoshi: jojjkjoiuijuk (What Mario asked!)
Peach: Who are you and how do you know our names?
Toadsworth: Sorry!! This is not Toadsworth!! I'm just a kid Pianta in disguise!! (Toadsworth's thoughts: I'm too old for fighting too!!)
Unknown Voice: Come with me!! All of you!!
*Asteroid fires Teleportation Beam, which takes Mario, Peach, Yoshi, and Toadsworth to an unknown galaxy*
Everyone: Where are you taking us???
Unknown Voice: You will soon see!!!
----To Be Continued----
Where is the gang being taken to?? Tune in next time for...
Chapter 2: A Fight For Their Life!

 

[Fanghorn]

ahsdjaklhakjh (Im speaking yoshi!)

Anyways, your fan-fic's first chapter was a bit short, and was written like a play, and not a story. IM hoping the Fan Fic will speed up with mroe action and more supence. Good topic for a fan fic, you have openings for lots of idea's.

 

[Sonicdude41]

Chapter 2: A Fight For Their Life!
Mario: Where are we???
Yoshi: jofuoijdoj (Where in the heck are we????)
Toadsworth: Help!!! I wanna go home!!
Peach: All of you! Calm down!!
---2 Hours Later---
Peach: I didn't want to have to do this, but...
*Peach slaps them silly*
Mario: Phew...Thank you...
Yoshi: ljjlejjoisji (Phew...I'm beat! Literally!)
Toadsworth: How dare you!! I did need that...
Peach: Thank you. As we were saying...
The Gang: WHERE ARE WE????
Unknown Voice: You are located on Super Smash Galaxy!!
*The gang's mouths drop open*
Mario: Mama mia!!
Yoshi: jjjjfjosjfj (Holy!!)
Toadsworth: I sure hope you did pack lunch Princess Peach.
Peach: Oh my! We're so far away from home!!
Unknown Voice: Get ready to Smash!!!! You four are going to fight...duh dee duh...so and so...no, won't do...ah-ha! You four are going to fight...Bowser!!
The Gang: We can take him!
Bowser: Don't be so sure about that...
*Bowser stomps into the stage*
Mario: Get ready everybody!
Unknown Voice: Get ready!!! 3...2...1...SMASH!!!
Bowser: Get a blast of my Fire Breath!!
Mario: Everyone jump!! Oh and Bowser, get a breath mint!
*The gang jumps for dear life*
Bowser: How dare you insult me!!! Seismic Pound!!
*Bowser does his Seismic Pound, creating a fault in the stage*
Mario: Double Jump everyone!!
*Everyone Double Jumps*
Bowser's thoughts: (Arrrggg...None of my attacks are working!! Time for a Super Mega Attack!!)
*Bowser jumps and prepares for a Combo move*
Peach: Uh oh! A combo!! Everyone, get set for our signiture move...
The Gang: The Super Mario Pound of Mushrooms!!
----To Be Continued----
Will the Super Mario Gang be Victorious? Tune in next time for...
Chapter 2: A Fight For Their Life!: Part II

 

[AnimalE10]

Nice story!