The Bell Tree Story (3)

Thanks guys. It makes me happy that you like it.... and it keeps you away from Animal Crossing.


:eek: But I had lots to say in that chapter, and I could've gone on more too. But I figured that was a good amount for a Part. But for now, which is your favorite Part so far?

I might change Parts to Chapters BTW, since all of you are calling it chapters. So that means when I edit, I'm not chnaging the story, I only would for spelling corrections.
 
:evillaugh: So I'm the evil guy right? That's still cool. I like the part where I hit you!
 
PKMNMasterSamus said:
Cool chapter...yay I was in it this time


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You were in the last one too. o_O I think. But anyways, I'm working on the next one tonight!
 
Lone_Wolf said:
Nice job fossil.If I was admin I'll give you the rank "Best story teller"
And did I die or just faint.
Suspence of the story dude. I always do that to keep you coming back for more. Cliffhangers as we authors call it.


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Thanks for the comments!!!!


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Kolvo said:
Lone_Wolf said:
Nice job fossil.If I was admin I'll give you the rank "Best story teller"
And did I die or just faint.
Suspence of the story dude. I always do that to keep you coming back for more. Cliffhangers as we authors call it.


:p

Thanks for the comments!!!!


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ya it is a good way to get readers to well reading
you change your sn back to kolvo
 
Lone_Wolf said:
Kolvo said:
Lone_Wolf said:
Nice job fossil.If I was admin I'll give you the rank "Best story teller"
And did I die or just faint.
Suspence of the story dude. I always do that to keep you coming back for more. Cliffhangers as we authors call it.


:p

Thanks for the comments!!!!


:D
ya it is a good way to get readers to well reading
you change your sn back to kolvo
Yeah, when I changed to Fossil, people missed Kolvo as my name. Well they can get used to it again. :lol:
 
<big><big><big>Chapter 5</big>

POKEFAB was there and he had Pokemon of all sorts. He said 'I wasn't expecting you here, exspecially in our time of crisis. See This wierd cloaked guy came around at speeds very fast. I sent a Arcanine after him but hes just to stealthy! Can you help?'. I agreed and helped. There I checked out the wounded tent. Many Pokemon and few men. But i saw a white wolf. One oddly that looked like Lone_Wolf. A Doctor said 'Yes, came rolling down a moutian. Yes, a few map charters checked out Lightwood forest, which changed. He had severe stings and amnesia. Also there was the OddCrazy person! I studied both of them but all of a sudden - BOOM! A building exploded and bodies went flying and shadow went around, forcing Pokemon against trees. The thing flew at me but I flew away with my K Cap. Then did my new Drill Attack into the ground, and it was Krool! He said 'You took my kingdom away from me! I shall have the world now as debt to your deed! POKEFAB is doomed, just as you will be later on!'. He grabbed me by the legs, twirled me around, and went flying..... I just keep flying everywhere now! I've had it!!!! I made a quick U-Turn and flew at him saying, 'I've had it with you - you wierd dude!'. Ka-pow! His cloak flew off, turned out....it was Justin from cell 125! I said 'Why did you do this to me after I saved you from the Sith?'. He said in a angry voice, 'I was a competitor against them but it turns out, I'm not alone.' Suddenly, a staff appeared in his had, purple colored. Right next to him, the wierd ZELDAFREAK appeared. He had a Triforce in his hand that was dark colored. Then Triforce3force appeared with them, in a dark appearnce as always. Triforce3force said 'We will prevail, and you can't beat us 3 with only you against us! Hahahahahahaha!'. Then a white cloud appeared over, and OddCrazyMe said, 'I'm your guardian Kolvo, and I'm always up for a adventure.' then Lone_Wolf came speeding and with his human voice said 'Evil made me a wolf, so its a fair share that evil gets their payback as well!'. ZELDAFREAK said in his frightening voice said 'Well, well, well, a team battle. Okay, capitans against capitans (Kolvo VS. Justin125) 2nd in commands against vice-versa (OddCrazyMe VS. ZELDAFREAK) and the skilled versus the skilled (Lone_Wolf VS. Trifroce3force). Oh, but we won't fight!'. A bunch of trees collapsed and formed a raft like thing and those 3 hopped on, and us 3 levitated onto the platform. Justin125 said 'Since this n00b Kolvo is such a underwhelming capitan, I'll explain, these logs will seperate and spin, and we will knock eachother off to the ground, oh and watch out for lightning!'. We were in the clouds and we each hopped on our own log of 6. It was on!
 
So. You are the Lord of Happy. I just died you fool. Why don't you care. Make me happy.



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<big><big><big>Chapter 6</big>

The logs spun, but OddCrazyMe just floated after Trifroce3force with avoiding her magic. ZELDAFREAK and Lone_Wolf were fiercely at it. But where was Justin........? My log began to spin fast. I fell! But I grasped onto one log. But then, Justin was climbing under a log, sneak attacking me. He rammed me off, and I fell into the clouds......... out into the middle of the deep blue sea. I shook, because the water was freezing. I suddenly saw TERRY, he was sitting on a rock. He said 'I control this part of the ocean, I have this special blue whistle, that allows me to call my carrier whale..... where did you come from? I said 'Its a long story' but I was still worried about my team to see if they were winning. Suddenly, with a howl, Lone_Wolf plummited in the water with Triforce3Force! Terry said 'Ahem, explain that!' I confessed 'Ok, Trifroce, ZELDAFREAK, and Justin and us got in a fight over a village POKEFAB lives in and they plan to rule- (Lone_Wolf was biting her cape off with his razor sharp teeth, while she attempted to drown him in a whirlpool) and Justin was the leader, and OddCrazyMe is still up there as his ghost still fighting Justin and ZELDAFREAK'. TERRY laughed 'It wasn't that long. But anyway (suddenly Justin popped far from the sky, much farther away from here, at least a good mile.) you shouldn't be here, this this lightning storm that appeared all of a sudden.'. I thought no wonder why there was no lightning in the battle! This is what ZELDAFREAK talked about! TERRY said 'And when a storm hits here, there bound to be a hurricane. Hop on my whale.........and we'll get the others too...'. My team and enemies alike hopped on, and I came to Justin with questions. 'Ok, why are you so evil???' Justin said in a quick reply 'WE ARE NOT EVIL! We are asassions. We kill for money. We wanted to kill you.'. Then I said 'Then you failed. Plus, who payed you?'. He said 'TERRY did...'. I looked behind me, and TERRY had a evil smile on his face.
 
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