Tips plz + I'll draw your Mayor or OC!

[Mercedes]

@Steph: ilylals

Spoiler: Luckypinch-san #2

Oh SHIZ! Cute!

 

[Kawaii Cupcakes]

Her-
And
Her-

 

[emmatheweirdo]

Lancey, bby c: Do you think it would be possible for me to request something else? :3

 

[samsquared]

Oh, huh, what, people want stuff from me still?
Sure~! You can still request.
+sorry KawaiiCupcakes, I drew your pics but then of course they were deleted b/c my computer crashed and I just never got to them again... *cries*

 

[SuperVandal]

Do you draw real life people?
<-- Liiike for instance this guy? :3

 

[samsquared]

Sure~

Spoiler: SuperVandal

derp

how was this thread revived almost right when i posted another thread cool

 

[Envelin]

I don't know if my icon is big enough but I'd love it if you could draw Envelin with her axe!

 

[samsquared]

No problem~
What color are her eyes, though?

 

[Envelin]

Thank you!

I usually just draw them black but they are the same color as her hair >v,<

 

[Katelyn]

Woah, are we allowed to request? :3

 

[samsquared]

Yes, yes: though this thread is old, I went ahead and separated the old requests from the new, lol.

 

[Katelyn]

Would you mind drawing two? >w< If not it's cool :3

Spoiler: Niko & Skylar

 

[LeilaChan]

I think you're looking pretty good, I think the colouring could be improved but seriously these are nice c:

If you'd like to draw my mayor I'd love it !

Spoiler

 

[neko-loverx3]

Hello dear uwu
I'll give some tips uvu
So here I go I guess~

I saw that shirohibiki already mentioned the color transition so I won't comment on that lol. But pupils do not move, the eye moves giving the illusion, I guess you could say illusion, that the pupil is moving but in reality it isn't Also highlights are more common on the outer parts of eyes in a chibi style. Sometimes the highlights being on the inside of the eye can cause a cross eyed look so its better to move them to the side. The eye size is very huge but your newest style its changed so I guess I won't say anything ahaha

The ear is actually not badly placed on the head its right where it should be height wise. Now its a little small but for the chibi style it works just fine~

The face is a little to sharp for the chibi face style. Try to make it soother but in your newest work it seems you have fixed that so great job!

Also like shirohibiki said the neck/face connection needs a little work on..

I would try working on chibiesk hands? Simple small "baby" hands work well Idk that might just be me though loll

The hair is pretty good though~~

Uh coloring as you probably know... and darker lineart (which you've fixed).

So yeah there you go uwu
No need to draw my mayor if you don't want to uvu
You look like you've got a lot of potential so just keep drawing!!

Edit: oh dear I just realized this was an old post that was revived. Hope you're still looking for critics if not then just ignore it, sorry!

 

[Arno]

I am in no place to give you criticism for art, as I tend to like all art regardless of skill level or technique.
But if you do have the time and motivation for it, I would greatly appreciate a doodle of [ Arno ].
Simplify him as much as you'd like or skip over my request if it's too complicated!

 

[samsquared]

*chopsnippitysnip
No need to draw my mayor if you don't want to uvu
You look like you've got a lot of potential so just keep drawing!!

Edit: oh dear I just realized this was an old post that was revived. Hope you're still looking for critics if not then just ignore it, sorry!

No, it's fine~ The thread is old, so the art is old and I should probably switch it out for a new piece if I'm gonna continue asking for criticism. But thank you! All of the advice is still helpful, considering that I still find myself making these mistakes.

As for everyone who has requested freebies so far, thank you! I will probably post them later tonight or tomorrow.

 

[MC4pros]

Are you still accepting requests for freebies? :3 Can you draw my OC's, please? Click for refs.
Thank you~

 

[neko-loverx3]

Ah yeah I didn't notice till I posted //sigh
But no problem and glad I could help you out even though it's old work work ;v;

 

[Mercedes]

Ayyy your art is super cute

 

[Aradai]

ayyyee your new art is hella.

Steph would've been all over it if she was here :'(