Would anyone in their right mind buy this? + critique, please!

[Nightmares]

Well, hello xD

I've improved a bit with my digital art, and I was wondering if anyone would buy this? (Probably not lmao)And how much?

Also, I was looking for some critique. (I know my lines are shaky, and my style changes too much x3)

Thanks for taking a look ^.^

Spoiler: A bunch of pretty crappy art xD

 

[Kawaii Cupcakes]

It's actually pretty cute
But as you mentioned the lines are way too shaky
And also the anatomy is off :/
Personally right now, my answer would be no, but if you improve I might!

 

[tae]

i agree w/ cupcakes. they're pretty cute honestly, and i know how hard it is to steady lines with tablet and other forms of digital art, but you'll improve in time. just keep working on it. as of now, i don't think i'd commission for them, but i look forward to seeing you improve over time.

 

[EloquentElixir]

It's pretty darn good if I say so myself
Although the anatomy is off, with a few studys and drawing it over and over again, I'm sure you'll get the hang of it
I really like the way you do curls, I cannot curl for the life of me...
I'd commission​

 

[gravyplz]

i'd buy it now to be honest, you have a really nice style, although studying will improve your anatomy immensely, as for the lines, i can only say practice, maybe try drawing over some nice anatomy .

 

[Nightmares]

Thanks everyone ^.^

I really appreciate your help!

 

[Locket]

thanks for helping me draw curls

You need more shading. Breasts aren't lumps, but are things that make a shadow underneath them.
And they are really shaky lines, and look reaaaaaaallllllllyyyyyyy pixelated.
And I can't even do correct anatomy, so no comment on that

 

[jiny]

I'd buy it! I especially love the first one!!

 

[sunflower]

The first one is amazing, and I love how you did the curls in the last one! i'd definitely buy it~

 

[yukiko]

what program are you using?

 

[riummi]

I would~ I really like the last one the most

 

[crystalmilktea]

I would too! You're definitely not bad, your style is very cute!

 

[Nightmares]

what program are you using?

SketchBook on my iPad xD

 

[Xerolin]

I love your style so much! <3 Id say work on the breasts a bit. When starting, i draw them in a teardrop shape, not two triangles sticking out the side ayy

 

[Nightmares]

I love your style so much! <3 Id say work on the breasts a bit. When starting, i draw them in a teardrop shape, not two triangles sticking out the side ayy

***** they're not ****ing triangles <3

 

[Xerolin]

***** they're not ****ing triangles <3

Rounded triangles? Idk..but id definitely work on the breasts. The rest looks great to me c:

 

[Nightmares]

Rounded triangles? Idk..but id definitely work on the breasts. The rest looks great to me c:

No...just no...maybe...
But yeah I still need to improve xD
Thanks ^.^

 

[Xerolin]

No...just no...maybe...
But yeah I still need to improve xD
Thanks ^.^

Thats just how mu dad used to describe it when i sucked. Never mine. Forgot i spoke XD

 

[Nightmares]

Thats just how mu dad used to describe it when i sucked. Never mine. Forgot i spoke XD

Nah it's fine xD ^.^
I'm grateful for the advice

 

[yukiko]

SketchBook on my iPad xD

its pretty good for an ipad drawing, keep working on them though. your doing great so far babe.