Would you buy this?
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toastia
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If it's worth that little, I'm not going to bother at all selling them and instead just do things that I want to do without putting a bunch of effort into it.
I'm ignoring you.
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himeki
hiatus
I think that was a little cruel for someone who has just started with a tablet?
Also, I think you should keep it up! I say keep the prices low, and depending on how popular they get, raise and lower!
starlark
timezone: bst (gmt +1)
Don't be discouraged so easily! :c
I probably wouldn't be paying upwards of 75TBT, I'm sorry to be so blunt but that's just my personal opinion. Hear me out though, because it could be worth a lot more if you take some criticism and follow through.
It's clear you've got the hang of colouring and basic anatomy, that much is good, but it's just a case of refining. I'm by no means an art expert (I'm only 14 for crying out loud xD). I like the shading on the shirt, but the shirt isn't the only thing that has shadows! Think of your light source-where is it? It's from the right then you'll need more shading on the left.
Also, think of where you can imply creases. Creases aren't just straight lines, they're all ziggy-zaggy and rumply! Add some folds in the shirt and jeans. As well as this, the face has some crease-like contours. Under the eyes (cheeks), cheekbones, chin, eyelids.
The hair is pretty good though. You've got the texture spot on-it just needs a bit of extra volume and flow and we're there.
Also the anatomy is a bit off. The torso is fine but the legs need a bit of work. Your legs don't go straight out when you bend them, they bend at the knee and your feet bend at the ankles!
The only other thing is the digits. To me it looks like the hands have four digits. Most humans have five! (Unless you're making an four-fingered OC, that's totally fine c: ) The shoes are a bit stubby-the ankles seem to go straight down and there's no heel. There's a curve from the bottom of the ankle to the foot-in the drawing there's just a little bump to indicate a foot.
I know this is most likely a chibi, but even chibis need their own more-human-esque touches!
Hope this helped, and good luck! c:
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Mariah's known for being blunt. Not rude or disrespectful per se, but there's no messing with them :L
I probably wouldn't be paying upwards of 75TBT, I'm sorry to be so blunt but that's just my personal opinion. Hear me out though, because it could be worth a lot more if you take some criticism and follow through.
It's clear you've got the hang of colouring and basic anatomy, that much is good, but it's just a case of refining. I'm by no means an art expert (I'm only 14 for crying out loud xD). I like the shading on the shirt, but the shirt isn't the only thing that has shadows! Think of your light source-where is it? It's from the right then you'll need more shading on the left.
Also, think of where you can imply creases. Creases aren't just straight lines, they're all ziggy-zaggy and rumply! Add some folds in the shirt and jeans. As well as this, the face has some crease-like contours. Under the eyes (cheeks), cheekbones, chin, eyelids.
The hair is pretty good though. You've got the texture spot on-it just needs a bit of extra volume and flow and we're there.
Also the anatomy is a bit off. The torso is fine but the legs need a bit of work. Your legs don't go straight out when you bend them, they bend at the knee and your feet bend at the ankles!
The only other thing is the digits. To me it looks like the hands have four digits. Most humans have five! (Unless you're making an four-fingered OC, that's totally fine c: ) The shoes are a bit stubby-the ankles seem to go straight down and there's no heel. There's a curve from the bottom of the ankle to the foot-in the drawing there's just a little bump to indicate a foot.
I know this is most likely a chibi, but even chibis need their own more-human-esque touches!
Hope this helped, and good luck! c:
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Mariah's known for being blunt. Not rude or disrespectful per se, but there's no messing with them :L
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toastia
seeker of truth
thanks for the criticism!Don't be discouraged so easily! :c
I probably wouldn't be paying upwards of 75TBT, I'm sorry to be so blunt but that's just my personal opinion. Hear me out though, because it could be worth a lot more if you take some criticism and follow through.
It's clear you've got the hang of colouring and basic anatomy, that much is good, but it's just a case of refining. I'm by no means an art expert (I'm only 14 for crying out loud xD). I like the shading on the shirt, but the shirt isn't the only thing that has shadows! Think of your light source-where is it? It's from the right then you'll need more shading on the left.
Also, think of where you can imply creases. Creases aren't just straight lines, they're all ziggy-zaggy and rumply! Add some folds in the shirt and jeans. As well as this, the face has some crease-like contours. Under the eyes (cheeks), cheekbones, chin, eyelids.
The hair is pretty good though. You've got the texture spot on-it just needs a bit of extra volume and flow and we're there.
Also the anatomy is a bit off. The torso is fine but the legs need a bit of work. Your legs don't go straight out when you bend them, they bend at the knee and your feet bend at the ankles!
The only other thing is the digits. To me it looks like the hands have four digits. Most humans have five! (Unless you're making an four-fingered OC, that's totally fine cThe shoes are a bit stubby-the ankles seem to go straight down and there's no heel. There's a curve from the bottom of the ankle to the foot-in the drawing there's just a little bump to indicate a foot.
I know this is most likely a chibi, but even chibis need their own more-human-esque touches!
Hope this helped, and good luck! c:
Mariah's known for being blunt. Not rude or disrespectful per se, but there's no messing with them :L
pillow bunny
Senior Member
I think it's probably worth ~150-300 bells! I can tell you put a lot of effort into shading, especially the hair. the legs seem a bit disjointed but other then that it looks great, considering you're only 11! lol I'm 1002 years older than you
I would request something if I had enough bells but I don't so do you want to art trade sometime?
I would request something if I had enough bells but I don't so do you want to art trade sometime?
Gracelia
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Tbh, it is really hard to see the features of the character when the hair and skin tone almost blend together, perhaps playing with palette colour(s) can work out well ^^;
I don't think it's worth to sell yet? But if you had to charge for your efforts, maybe 25tbt. Keep practicing! You gotta start somewhere (am in the same boat haha) -- get comfy with your tablet and lining! Lining can be such a pain, but once you've got it down, you'll get a lot better too.
I don't think it's worth to sell yet? But if you had to charge for your efforts, maybe 25tbt. Keep practicing! You gotta start somewhere (am in the same boat haha) -- get comfy with your tablet and lining! Lining can be such a pain, but once you've got it down, you'll get a lot better too.
