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bittermeat said:
nephewjack said:
All these make me want another one from you.
Haha. I just looked over your thread in TBT marketplace, and I was thinking of making you another.

:p
If I have time, I can get it done by the end of Friday.
Yays. I really wish other sig makers would actually look there, too. :/
 
#Garrett said:
Why does the dog look like a Nazi?


(Not trying offend anyone)
Reminds me more like General Pepper from Star Fox.
 
bittermeat said:
Signature_27.png


This is a new one. Walrein!!
I love this!
Seans looks funny, I like the dog xD
 
bittermeat said:
Signature_29.png

Request for Nephewjack.
Lighting is a LITTLE too bit dark, so it's hard to see the focal point more clear. I liked how you did the border shading with a soft brush on the Walrein signature, but on this signature you overdid it. The walrein one was perfect, not too little, nor too much. Text is a little hard to notice, it blends in too much. Make it a different color, but one that corresponds to the dark blue. Overall: 7/10. On the positive side, the flow is nice and clean.
 
Nikoking said:
Lighting is a LITTLE too bit dark, so it's hard to see the focal point more clear. I liked how you did the border shading with a soft brush on the Walrein signature, but on this signature you overdid it. The walrein one was perfect, not too little, nor too much. Text is a little hard to notice, it blends in too much. Make it a different color, but one that corresponds to the dark blue. Overall: 7/10. On the positive side, the flow is nice and clean.
It was so hard for me to concentrate with a headache. Yeah, it's too dark. It has too much blackness and the font is unnoticeable. I won't let jack use this one. It's horrible, now that you point the flaws out. Now, I need a simple, good render.

:p
 
bittermeat said:
hmm i wanna CC. :D

k, i think the render should come out of the background more
it looks too dark, it needs to be a lil brighter, (and maybe increase the contrast a lil bit)
and the render looks a lil over sharpened.
idk.. but when i see candy i think bright and happy, and this signature is rather dark-ish.
6.5/10
 
bittermeat said:
Signature_30-1.png

A new one that adorkable x requested.

CC.
Well, the colors are alright, but the lighting once again is bad :\... Like Kalinn said, this render seems bright and not dark, so don't have a dark lighting to it. If this helps, do a new layer filled with white at around overlay 60 - 80% Opacity. That will make it brighter. Also, you should do some dodging tools on the focal point, helps it stand out more.

Oh yeah, and also lower down the sharping, the render looks way too oversharpened and it has a low quality feel to it.
 
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Do you mind sending me the picture you used there? I can't find a good one of them eating the blue Ice lollies.

Also, do you have a certain site you use for pictures?
 
SAMwich said:
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Do you mind sending me the picture you used there? I can't find a good one of them eating the blue Ice lollies.

Also, do you have a certain site you use for pictures?
I just started using Planetrenders. A lot of the time, I get images like these off of photobucket.

EDIT:
Thanks for the CC, everyone.

Here =)
Signature_31.png

http://i625.photobucket.com/albums/tt335/brandonjacobp/Signature_31.png

Signature_30-2.png

(And this is just a brighter version).
 
I know this may sound funny since you said it to me, but your sigs are getting repetitive. They all feel oversharpened and overshaded, although it's hard to notice, but I have a pretty close eyes for mistakes. Try out some different techniques for your signatures, like using some blur or smudge tricks. Maybe that will make your sigs better, and 7/10 for your recent signature. I know it's not shaded, but it's sharpened.

EDIT: The adorkable signature looks better with the lighter shading, a neat 9/10 for that.
 
Nikoking said:
I know this may sound funny since you said it to me, but your sigs are getting repetitive. They all feel oversharpened and overshaded, although it's hard to notice, but I have a pretty close eyes for mistakes. Try out some different techniques for your signatures, like using some blur or smudge tricks. Maybe that will make your sigs better, and 7/10 for your recent signature. I know it's not shaded, but it's sharpened.

EDIT: The adorkable signature looks better with the lighter shading, a neat 9/10 for that.
Yup, I thought it was pretty silly of me to say that to you, and then do it myself. I'm going to try to get a new concept going and maybe have something done by this weekend. I need to observe more signature techniques and such. Maybe, try some tutorials (which I usually hate doing).

I will try to lay off the sharpening. xp
 
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