Criticism?

[Rei Kisaragi]

Sooo looking for some feedback on my traditional and digital art.

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(watercolour practice)

These are really a collage of doodles, since I havn't done too many peices lately, but there are a couple in there. My goal would be to start doing commisions (they would be scanned if traditional) so please give me some feedback~

 

[Aquari]

its actually not that bad, ive DEFINITELY seen worse

 

[Rei Kisaragi]

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its actually not that bad, ive DEFINITELY seen worse

Thanks

 

[DomesticatePiggy]

I don't have any criticism, sorry. >.< But, I wanted to say your art is amazing! O.O And I wish I could draw like you! ;_;

 

[pickle inkii.]

Your art looks really rad so far. The anatomy could use work on that digital art of the emo(?) girl. Lemme just say your chibis are amazing.
When doing digital art, try scanning/taking a pic of your traditional art and trace over it. You'll get some nice results.

 

[That Zephyr Guy]

Your art is pretty good, and like what pickle said the anatomy could use some work.

If I had to nitpick something else though, it's that your pictures, aside from the ones that have very cool effects, sort of all blend together as a plethora of headshots/waist-ups. This isn't bad, but it just shows that you have a very defined comfort zone and it would definitely benefit you to break out of it a lot more often.

My suggestion, try to play around with point of view, perspective, and poses. (The three Ps)
Preferably try to make the poses very dynamic, because this will give you plenty of practice with interesting anatomy and getting a feel for the line of action.


I hope I didn't say anything too harsh, because do keep in mind this is just me nitpicking if anything else. Your art is pretty good right now and it has a very defined style which makes it very enjoyable to look at.

That's all I got.

 

[Rei Kisaragi]

Your art looks really rad so far. The anatomy could use work on that digital art of the emo(?) girl. Lemme just say your chibis are amazing.
When doing digital art, try scanning/taking a pic of your traditional art and trace over it. You'll get some nice results.

Thanks, and I know the emo girl ones anatomy is pretty bad, thats a pretty old one c:

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Your art is pretty good, and like what pickle said the anatomy could use some work.

If I had to nitpick something else though, it's that your pictures, aside from the ones that have very cool effects, sort of all blend together as a plethora of headshots/waist-ups. This isn't bad, but it just shows that you have a very defined comfort zone and it would definitely benefit you to break out of it a lot more often.

My suggestion, try to play around with point of view, perspective, and poses. (The three Ps)
Preferably try to make the poses very dynamic, because this will give you plenty of practice with interesting anatomy and getting a feel for the line of action.


I hope I didn't say anything too harsh, because do keep in mind this is just me nitpicking if anything else. Your art is pretty good right now and it has a very defined style which makes it very enjoyable to look at.

That's all I got.

Ty for this I really do need to try some different stuff C: