Critique my practice~ (Go to page 5)

[Albuns]

well i mean the first one, the head looks good,
but for the second drawing, the cheeks looks a little pointy and cut off, u know?

and trust me i know good art when i see it!
(i have an art instagram w almost 1.5k followers, so i know lots of good artists! if u wanna see it, press the word "instagram" in my sig )

Have you heard of Matt Roszak?
Now that man there, he makes good art!

- - - Post Merge - - -

hey! you're art is good, and you're gonna be a really great artist! my style of drawing is more cartoonish, so i rarely find myself in a situation where i need to draw clothing wrinkles. and i'm not quite sure how to explain how i draw long hair. (however, i livestream often so if you would like to watch me do it, that'd be awesome!) but could i make suggestion about the chibi drawing you did? i would try making the neck smaller. it looks disproportionate compared to the other limbs. i did a somewhat chibi style drawing just yesterday, if you want to see an example! [here]

Sure, I don't mind checking out a few of your stream.
And hm... I think the neck looks alright, wouldn't changing the size of the limbs to be bigger be better? o:
Also, Chimpo's art ish simple and cute! I wanna try going for that sorta look next time~
Thanks for the generous feedback.

 

[Albuns]

Bumpity! Here with some more art, this time involving hairlines and and stuff!

I think I did pretty poorly on the face, but how about the hair? Is there anything I can add or subtract from it?

 

[crystalmilktea]

I think the face is a lot better than what I saw in your first post! It's definitely getting there Hair looks a bit stiff right now, kind of like it's part of a statue?

 

[Albuns]

I think the face is a lot better than what I saw in your first post! It's definitely getting there Hair looks a bit stiff right now, kind of like it's part of a statue?

Yaay~ at least I improved in one thing!
Now that I think about it, I guess it sorta does. Any tips for how I could make it not look as statuesque next time? owo

 

[Aesthetic]

Yaay~ at least I improved in one thing!
Now that I think about it, I guess it sorta does. Any tips for how I could make it not look as statuesque next time? owo

you could add loose strands of hair

 

[Albuns]

you could add loose strands of hair

Oh ya, I guess that's one way~
Thankies, Deadpool!

 

[himeki]

As Aesthetic said, you should add some flyaways to make it less stiff. Are you going for a 3/4 view? If so, the side of the face that is slightly hidden needs more shading. The limbs are super skinny compared to the head and neck, and the waist is way to slim. Otherwise, your definitely improving!

 

[Albuns]

As Aesthetic said, you should add some flyaways to make it less stiff. Are you going for a 3/4 view? If so, the side of the face that is slightly hidden needs more shading. The limbs are super skinny compared to the head and neck, and the waist is way to slim. Otherwise, your definitely improving!

[ /)o /// w /// o(\ ] Awh, thankies~
And ya, was trying to make it look like the body was facing the right side and the face at the spectator.
I can't figure out the neck. To me, I feel like if I made it wider, it'll look too fat. xD
Bah, I knew I should've given him a bit more flesh on the waist, even if I was trying to make him look incredibly skinny.

 

[riummi]

For the latest drawing, i think the head was done really well. Its just that the body is way to small ;u; His shoulder should be more broad and overall the rest of his body should be bigger. The hair on the head looks a bit sculpted, i think someone else mentioned this as well, but i do see improvement!

Dont worry about him looking to fat lol. I used to draw mines like sticks but adding more flesh makes it look a lot better. xD

 

[Albuns]

For the latest drawing, i think the head was done really well. Its just that the body is way to small ;u; His shoulder should be more broad and overall the rest of his body should be bigger. The hair on the head looks a bit sculpted, i think someone else mentioned this as well, but i do see improvement!

Dont worry about him looking to fat lol. I used to draw mines like sticks but adding more flesh makes it look a lot better. xD

Haha, okie then. So next time I should go for:
-Fatter limbs
-More out of place hairs
-Bigger build

Thankies for the feedback! ^^

 

[Albuns]

How's the hair for this one? I decided to try and draw a short girlish hairstyle this time. Is it still statuesque or am I safe? o:
Also, that fur collar was a DREAD to do. x.x

 

[Ariel.]

It's cute. It looks like a little prince or something.

 

[Albuns]

It's cute. It looks like a little prince or something.

'Tis a princess. xD

 

[Ariel.]

'Tis a princess. xD

Princess* srry

I feel r00d.

- - - Post Merge - - -

Give her longer lashes xD

 

[himeki]

As Ariel said, she needs longer lashes and there is a lack of face and fur shading, but otherwise you've really improved!

 

[Albuns]

Ah phooey, I hate drawing fur so much. ;w;
But Okie. More shading on fur and feminine eyelashes.
Thank you once again fur your feedback! x3

 

[Benevoir]

Personally I feel that it's fine without adding the eyelashes. Though it's up to you if you want to include it in your future artwork. c:

If it's alright with you I can do a redline since I find it a little easier rather than rambling in my post haha!

 

[Albuns]

Personally I feel that it's fine without adding the eyelashes. Though it's up to you if you want to include it in your future artwork. c:

If it's alright with you I can do a redline since I find it a little easier rather than rambling in my post haha!

Oh, yes please!
That would be really helpful for future references~ ^w^

 

[Benevoir]

Spoiler: Big image

^ Click for full size!

Here you go, Alby! I hope this will help you in some ways and I apologize for drawing it in a 3/4 angle. orz

If there's any questions regarding with the redline feel free to ask me!

 

[Albuns]

Wow, no complaints from me!
That's absolutely fantastic, thank you!
It actually looks more amazing than the original, hue. ;w;