Critique Pwease~ haalp again :3

[roroselle]

I just randomly drew a small Chibi girl holding a dango lol
This was a quick draw >.<

Any thoughts? :3

 

[MC4pros]

I just randomly drew a small Chibi girl holding a dango lol
This was a quick draw >.<

Any thoughts? :3

omg, wowowow! *o* So cuuute~ I love the eyes! Great work!

 

[roroselle]

omg, wowowow! *o* So cuuute~ I love the eyes! Great work!

Thanks fwend <3
Yes eyes are getting to be my strong point! Lol

 

[Amilee]

cuuute
i like the eyes and the outfit!
and dangos are to cute c:

 

[Allycat]

I just randomly drew a small Chibi girl holding a dango lol
This was a quick draw >.<

Any thoughts? :3

CUTE!!!
ahhhhhh

 

[Jarrad]

I love how visible and clear your improvements are

what you're drawing now compared to what you were back when you made this thread is stacks better

i know u draw chibi, but have you ever given just a normal portrait ago? like an ordinary anime gal or somthin

 

[roroselle]

cuuute
i like the eyes and the outfit!
and dangos are to cute c:

thank you~~
yeah i love dangos to see and eat XD

CUTE!!!
ahhhhhh

<33 ty ally

I love how visible and clear your improvements are

what you're drawing now compared to what you were back when you made this thread is stacks better

i know u draw chibi, but have you ever given just a normal portrait ago? like an ordinary anime gal or somthin

omgsh thanks Jarrad!

yeah i tried before, i'll post what i did like few weeks ago
i still need SO MUCH improvement in it hahah

Spoiler: Anime-ish stuff

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i think i'm ready to start an auction probably on small chibis
i created an OC and i personally think shes so cute~ haha

her outfit is based off an actual outfit i have courtesy of Pacsun lol

love to hear thoughts on it!
and if an auction would be a good option for now?

 

[MC4pros]

My gosh, your chibis are getting better and better! I LOVE your new OC! :> Eyes are definitely your strong point! I love the pose, the hair, and the outfit! I'd probably work on adding little tuffs of fur/hair on the ears.

You could start an auction or you can continue improving. It's up to you! ^_^ I suggest making adoptables just like your OC and auctioning them off for bells. You'd make a lot of money off of them! I would definitely buy one!

Oh, by the way, did you use the brush settings I sent you?

Keep it up! You're doing great! c:

 

[roroselle]

My gosh, your chibis are getting better and better! I LOVE your new OC! :> Eyes are definitely your strong point! I love the pose, the hair, and the outfit! I'd probably work on adding little tuffs of fur/hair on the ears.

You could start an auction or you can continue improving. It's up to you! ^_^ I suggest making adoptables just like your OC and auctioning them off for bells. You'd make a lot of money off of them! I would definitely buy one!

Oh, by the way, did you use the brush settings I sent you?

Keep it up! You're doing great! c:

Thank you! Oh right fluff would look cuter! This is why I need you<3
I didn't yet! Cuz I have manga studio so I'm still tryna figure out how to at least make it similar haha
Cuz some setting options are similar

Thanks again ^.^v

 

[MC4pros]

Thank you! Oh right fluff would look cuter! This is why I need you<3
I didn't yet! Cuz I have manga studio so I'm still tryna figure out how to at least make it similar haha
Cuz some setting options are similar

Thanks again ^.^v

Haha, I'll always be here to help! ;D <3

I didn't know you use Manga Studio! Have you tried Paint Tool Sai? It's pretty good and the settings I sent you go with Paint Tool Sai. If you can't get the brush settings to match, just let me know! I might be able to help you!

 

[roroselle]

Haha, I'll always be here to help! ;D <3

I didn't know you use Manga Studio! Have you tried Paint Tool Sai? It's pretty good and the settings I sent you go with Paint Tool Sai. If you can't get the brush settings to match, just let me know! I might be able to help you!

Yeah I have SAI too! But for some reason I got super comfy with manga studio xD
I actually started sketching with SAI but coloring is weird for me still (x

Thanks! I might be buggin you for help soon tehe

 

[Keitara]

thank you~~
yeah i love dangos to see and eat XD



<33 ty ally



omgsh thanks Jarrad!

yeah i tried before, i'll post what i did like few weeks ago
i still need SO MUCH improvement in it hahah

Spoiler: Anime-ish stuff

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i think i'm ready to start an auction probably on small chibis
i created an OC and i personally think shes so cute~ haha

her outfit is based off an actual outfit i have courtesy of Pacsun lol

love to hear thoughts on it!
and if an auction would be a good option for now?

*dies because of cuteness*

Your eyes look so amazing! But maybe it would be cooler if you would make them individual for each character? I mean, they look gorgeous! But each one has the same eyes Since not only hairstyle or clothes are part of design and personality, individual eyes are very important; at least I think so ^^
Actually, everything looks great! The oc is perfecttttt
You could definitely start an auction! But like always, I have no moneyyyy and I live in the basement
So I can't afford anything '-' But if I had, I'd bid, too!
Keep improving!! Ahh I don't even need to say it anymore, you improve anyway c:

 

[MC4pros]

Yeah I have SAI too! But for some reason I got super comfy with manga studio xD
I actually started sketching with SAI but coloring is weird for me still (x

Thanks! I might be buggin you for help soon tehe

Oh, I see. The flat coloring brush I sent might make the coloring process smoother for you.

And no no!! You are not bugging me at all!! I like helping the artist community, haha! x)

 

[roroselle]

Oh, I see. The flat coloring brush I sent might make the coloring process smoother for you.

And no no!! You are not bugging me at all!! I like helping the artist community, haha! x)

thanks fwend :3

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trying guidelines for that anime style!

 

[roroselle]

finished it last night, any thoughts (x

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*dies because of cuteness*

Your eyes look so amazing! But maybe it would be cooler if you would make them individual for each character? I mean, they look gorgeous! But each one has the same eyes Since not only hairstyle or clothes are part of design and personality, individual eyes are very important; at least I think so ^^
Actually, everything looks great! The oc is perfecttttt
You could definitely start an auction! But like always, I have no moneyyyy and I live in the basement
So I can't afford anything '-' But if I had, I'd bid, too!
Keep improving!! Ahh I don't even need to say it anymore, you improve anyway c:

thanks fwend<3
mm true, i'll try to differentiating eye designs thanks for the input :3

 

[Finnian]

thank you~~
yeah i love dangos to see and eat XD



<33 ty ally



omgsh thanks Jarrad!

yeah i tried before, i'll post what i did like few weeks ago
i still need SO MUCH improvement in it hahah

Spoiler: Anime-ish stuff

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i think i'm ready to start an auction probably on small chibis
i created an OC and i personally think shes so cute~ haha

her outfit is based off an actual outfit i have courtesy of Pacsun lol

love to hear thoughts on it!
and if an auction would be a good option for now?

your improving too fast. Literally just opacity lock your line layer and color the lines.

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finished it last night, any thoughts (x

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thanks fwend<3
mm true, i'll try to differentiating eye designs thanks for the input :3

WOWIE

 

[Keitara]

Waaaa it looks good! The eyes are amazing as always! c:
But the body looks a bit flat... maybe you can try to add some slight lines for muscles around the neck? And I prefer light reflexes to be vertical, flowing with the hair. Well, the horizontal light reflexes are commonly used in anime, so I guess both works. And the clothes on the left side look flat, too. Uhmmm like they are printed on the body. Put a bit volume in it, folds and stuffffff

as I expect of the genius Roroselle, you'll reach perfection right away

 

[roroselle]

your improving too fast. Literally just opacity lock your line layer and color the lines.

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WOWIE

so honored you think so!
okie i tried to color lines on my entry for fup10k's contest :3 thanks for the advice!

Waaaa it looks good! The eyes are amazing as always! c:
But the body looks a bit flat... maybe you can try to add some slight lines for muscles around the neck? And I prefer light reflexes to be vertical, flowing with the hair. Well, the horizontal light reflexes are commonly used in anime, so I guess both works. And the clothes on the left side look flat, too. Uhmmm like they are printed on the body. Put a bit volume in it, folds and stuffffff

as I expect of the genius Roroselle, you'll reach perfection right away

ah, i see!
i'll look up tutorials on clothes :3
lol hair is one of the next things i need to work on, the way you do hair is amazing!!
thanks again for the help as always<33
im honored to know youre rootin for my improvement T.T<3

 

[Finnian]

so honored you think so!
okie i tried to color lines on my entry for fup10k's contest :3 thanks for the advice!



ah, i see!
i'll look up tutorials on clothes :3
lol hair is one of the next things i need to work on, the way you do hair is amazing!!
thanks again for the help as always<33
im honored to know youre rootin for my improvement T.T<3

I WANNA SEE

 

[roroselle]

I WANNA SEE

Okie (x

Hopefully I didn't butcher your advice lol xD