Help me find a reasonable comission price!

[biibii]

Spoiler: Gijinkas

Spoiler: Busts

Spoiler: Anime

this drawing is actually one year old and i fixed the eyestyle. WOOPIE!

Spoiler: MY STYLE LMFAO

please excuse the caterpillars over her eyes.

I promise ill fix the backgrounds so they dont look all gross nd dirty, but please put your opinions on here! Some of these drawings are very old so please bear with me ahhhh////

Might not be good enough for comissions though rip.

They take me around 1-2 hours to complete and maybe 15 minutes to upload (im a super lazy person someone PLeASE SEND HELP)

 

[Mega_Cabbage]

I think you should work on them a little more before starting commissions. I like the first one the best, but the coloring (the shading seems inconsistent) and line art could use some work. I don't really know if you want advice or not since you didn't mention, so I'll just leave it at that.

 

[biibii]

yes id love advice!

my coloring is not as good as id like it to be since i use mexican color pencils from the dollar store #cheaplyfe

id say first and last have the worst lineart eh?

 

[Mega_Cabbage]

Nah just the last one. The first one has the best (it's cleaner and more together) Some of the line art breaks, leaving open gaps where they should be connected. I would also recommend varying the width of the lines (wider on the outline and the top edges of the eye, skinnier on the details).

Crayola is a pretty cheap brand as well, but it's not too bad if you blend the colors together. Instead of just using the same color at varying pressures to shade, try using a bolder/darker color. You could use violet blue to shade the blue that you used and red violet for red. That way you can use more layers to make the colors more vibrant.

It also helps to imagine a light source. I see you tried it for the girl with the staff/spear, but the other ones seem a bit confusing. The deer has a shadow on the right side of their shirt and neck, signalling the light coming from the left, but the shadow on their face says a different direction. The bust shows that the light is bouncing off the very top of the girl's head, meaning the rest of the pic should look a bit darker except for a few places that extend out. You have to treat your piece as a three dimensional figure instead of just looking at it from left to right. Some parts stick out farther than or lay over the others, so put some shading to show that (shadow under the face, hair, bottom lip, around the nose, etc.). Having a reference is extremely useful.

 

[biibii]

Tysm!!