I like the first picture in your OP! I don't really like the others, though. I think the lines are way too thick and to be blunt, it's sort of like you free-styled them all without any reference/planning.
Thanks for respecting my opinion, and thank you for being polite! Some people think that replying to a question negatively deserves instant animosity, when it doesn't.
If you have the time I'd strongly advise you to check out some of MarkCrilley's tutorials! He's probably the best drawer that makes youtube content. In fact, I used to watch loads of his videos when I used to draw and it helped improve my drawing by stacks!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UGCiQySjIp4
(Once you get the main shape of the face/body or whatever it is you're drawing, just remember to focus on the
tiny details, as they're just as important as the eyes, nose, ears etc.)
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You do realise you've just contradicted yourself by calling me rude, right? Jenna has distinctly wrote in her OP that she wants our opinions on her art (hence the question in the thread title, if that wasn't clear enough for you). Sorry, but I'm not following some stupid thread on how I should construct my opinion on something. If somebody wants feedback on their work then I'll give it to them, whether it's positive or negative.
If somebody drew a picture of a circle and called it a "face" would you compliment their work? Because clearly by your logic doing anything otherwise would be rude and unhelpful.