My ACNL Fanfiction

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Before I post this, I wanna say that this is not entirely true and I made this long after I started Animal Crossing, so yeah, I probably won't stop adding parts to my fanfiction for a while.... so enjoy!


Chapter 1 - A Talking Cat
I watched as the whole world I knew around me drifted away swiftly, with an uneasy feeling in my stomach I start to wonder if this really was a good idea. I started to remind my self I'm turning over a new leaf and starting fresh. I smiled and looked at what might be my new home. Suddenly a creepy cat jumped out from the shadows! "Hi, I'm Rover!" the cat said. "What's your name?" "My name is... uh... maybe..." For some reason, I couldn't remember my name that I had used for years of studying. So I chose a new name. "How about... Brittany... or Patricia... or maybe Ella... perhaps Eve... nah... too long..." "Eve it is!" exclaimed Rover. "So, where are we heading to?" Rover said. "WHAT?! I thought you knew where we where going!" I said angrily. "Ummm... uh.... well... you see...." "Ok, fine, I'll head to... uh... maybe Mantadae? I dunno." "Mantadae it is! Is this Mantadae?" He asked while showing me a map of a town. "Hmmm... yeah... I hope so." I said doubtfully. I noticed that there were two beaches: one long one and one short one. And a recycling thingy was next to the short beach. It was all so precise! Suddenly, I also noticed that Rover was walking like a human. "Are you ok? Shouldn't you be walking on... I don't know... 4 legs?" I asked nervously. "What do you mean?" He asked. "I studied biology all my life.... and this isn't possible... for you to keep smiling like that... what's wrong with you?!" I said angrier than ever. I realized that this was super weird, so I did the only smart thing at that point--- I jumped off the train and started my hike to Mantadae. It was hot, then snowy, then rainy, and then cloudy. So after two whole months, I finally made it to the town. Right before I jumped over the train tracks, I noticed that a lot of animals (also walking on two legs) were standing at the train station expecting their mayor. 'Could I be the mayor?' I thought to myself. 'Well, I guess it's time for me to find out.' I ran to them. "IT'S OUR MAYOR!" they all exclaimed. 'Alright I guess that settles that.' I thought again. "Yep! Mayor, that's me! Reporting for duty."
 
Alright, here it is!

Chapter 2 - Getting Settled

"Oh Mayor! Where have you been?" asked a cute puppy who was also talking. "And by the way, I'm Isabelle!" "Awwww... I mean, I've been... well, you don't want to know." I said awkwardly. "Does everybody here talk and walks on two legs and smiles constantly and... are all of you... animals?!" "Yep! Every one of us!" exclaimed a cute white hamster, clearly not affected by my 'insults'. I noticed that there were lots of other cute animals like for example, there was another fluffy hamster, a mouse lifting weights (I don't know how that's possible), a elephant race car driver (again, how is this happening?), and a girly mouse with a big bow.
I was forced to set up a tent and then Isabelle made me do her chores. I caught a fish and a bug, got a seashell for some reason, and afterwards, she told me about how grateful she was. "Thank you so very much! Here's a present from my home." 'Ooooh...' I thought to myself. 'Maybe its a basket of toothpaste. I could sure use that right now.' I looked up, focused on the basket. "Here you go! It's a basket of fruit!" I sighed. "Thanks, Isabelle." I said with sadness. "I put it in your pocket!" Isabelle said happily. "How does that even fit?!" I looked in my pocket. Looks like I could fit 15 more things in my tiny pouch. "Talk to the villagers! They can't wait to see the new mayor! And they all love making friends!" Isabelle said excitedly.
I saw the map for Mantadae, and I decided to visit Big Top, the racecar elephant. I looked in his room, and I noticed that it was a mix of a balloon theme/workout theme. "Hey!" he said in that unusual happy manner. "Wanna chit-chat, villain?" I saw that I only had two answering options for hi. I could either say, "Hey, what's up?" or "Nevermind. Leave me alone!". He was 10 feet tall, kinda weird, and his catchprase was extremely annoying, so I clicked the second option. "Nevermind. Leave me alone!" I said. "Yeesh, ok, bye Eve, villain."
I went to the next villager, Flurry, the fluffy white hamster. "Hi! How are you doing?" she said cheerfully. The two options this time were: "Wanna talk?" or "I wasn't talking to you.". She was less scary, so I said, "Wanna talk?". "Say, Eve, do you know much about design? You know, Feng Shui?" she said. "Eh... no, not at all... bye!"
I ran to Hamphrey's house. "Hello." he said. He was another fluffy hamster that looked like he could beat you up. I chose the second option and said, "Bye!"
I ran to Moose's house. "Hey, hey, hey!" he said. I noticed that he was lifting weights as he was talking. Again, I chose the second option. "C'ya!".
Then, I ran to the mouse with a huge pink bow. She had music playing in her room and it was really quite happy! "Hi! What is it?" I chose the first option, because frankly, she was adorable. "Let's talk!" I said. "Have you ever wanted to be a popstar?" she said excitedly. "No. I have stagefright." I said honestly. "That is like, so, totally cool!" she said.
I started to walk to the town hall to talk to Isabelle. 'Well, at least I made two friends.' I thought. 'Hope I actually get a good reward this time.' I almost completely forgot! 'I have to plant my apple trees so I'll get some money around here! Why does life here have to be so hard?!' I thought again as I planted the trees in front of my new house. I liked where I put my tent. Right beside the town hall, and not too far from Re-Tail.
I quickly ran back to the town hall. "Oh, so you met them? They're really all quite nice. Now it's time for a celebration!" she said. We went to the plaza and she told me to plant a tree in the middle of it. "Here, plant it!" said Isabelle. "Ok, sure." I said obediently. After I planted it, for some reason, everyone applauded! 'What's happening?!' I thought. 'They didn't applaud for me when I planted my apple trees. What's going on?!' Almost like she read my thoughts, she said, "As this tree grows, so will the town!" "Oh... that makes sense." After the celebration, I walked back to my house. I noticed that a house reservation for someone. I read it, and it said, "Reserved for Colton." 'Hmmm... I wonder who Colton is...' I thought. I sold some cherries, which were the local fruit, and then I had enough to buy a bed. Timmy and Tommy were bad bargainers, that's all I'm gonna say. I bought a bed with all my bells. I put it in my cute little tent. Afterwards, I sold more cherries and paid off my house mortgage!
Just as I was about to sleep, someone knocked. And again. And again. "Eve, I know it's you! LET ME IN!" someone yelled. 'Stay calm Eve, I bet it's nothing.' I said to reassure myself. But that didn't work. I was fearful, who knows, maybe someone would try to drag me into my old life of studying biology. "Eve, OPEN THE DOOR!" I still didn't answer, too worried about the bad things that might happen if I did let them in my tent. I thought that I would be safe in here, just not answering. But the person did the unexpected. It let itself in. I watched as a shadow of an animal walked in my tent. The creature towered over me, and I could not yet see its figure. Terrified, I sat up to get a better glimpse. I saw the horrifying shadow. The shadow of an--- "Hey, hey, hey, villain!"

You can check this out on Wattpad. It's called "Animal Crossing New Leaf Fanfiction: Eve", made by me ;), and you can find it if you look up "acnl". That's it! :D

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Sorry, this is INCREDIBLY long. ;)
 
YASSSSSS!!!!!!!! I LOVE FANFICTION
 
Yay!! I own a book-blog so wattpad is life! And so is ACNL! Thank you, this is great!! Keep it up :)
 
I'm always one chapter ahead in Wattpad, so yeah, you should probably check that out! :D
 
When a new character speaks, you should always press "enter" and start a new paragraph, because sometimes it can be hard to tell who's talking or what's going when there are no moments of separation. Just thought I'd give some advice :)
 
Ok, my stuff looks much more edited and neater in Wattpad. Again, thanks BellGreen! :D
 
Alright, next chapter! I spaced things out a bit this time. Enjoy! ^_^

---elephant.
"BIG TOP! What are you doing in here?! I was about to sleep!" I said angrily.
"Just came by for a visit with my good old pal, Eve." he said happily.
"GET OUT!" I yelled.
"Ok, but yeesh, you're terrible at warm welcomes, just sayin'." he said honestly. As he left, I tried to drift off to sleep. But after that frightful experience, I knew I couldn't sleep. Not after that rude elephant barged into my house. So I went to Able Sisters, and since all the clothes were ugly, I looked in the accessory part of the store. I saw these cute green glasses, so I bought them. I tried to drift off to sleep once more, and it didn't work again. So instead, I went to the beach. There was a dock there. No boats, though.
'Hmm... maybe it's there for decoration.' I thought. I decided that I would take sleep medicine since I wasn't tired. Once I took it, I felt sleepy. Incredibly sleepy. So sleepy that I sleep-walked all the way to my house. And I put the covers over my head, and for the first time in two months, rested.
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The Next Day
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I woke up in the morning only to find that someone was knocking at my door.
"Eve, open the door now." the voice said. "Now, and only now." I was scared to death, just like I had been the night Big Top came rolling in. I opened the door. It was Isabelle.
"Hi, Eve! I came to give you this wallpaper for your new house."
"House, what hou---" I looked around me. Somehow, my tent had become a house overnight.
"Oh, thanks! Now bye!" As I pushed her out of my house, she urgently exclaimed,
"Wait, but I have to tell you that--" I slammed the door on her.
Ah, time to greet the new villager, Colton! I walked in the house expecting another dumb villager, but instead I found a handsome, young, and blond horse.
"Hi... how are you.. packing... well?" I said, too stunned by how in love I was with this horse.
"Oh, hey." He said. "I'm packing right now, so we can't exactly talk for a while, ok?"
"Ok, sure... bye." I said as I ran out. I got more sleep medicine at Timmy and Tommy's store and after that, I sold some seashells. I went to my house and was about to sleep, when suddenly, a shadow walked through the door. It kept moving forward and forward, and suddenly it yelled,
"Hey, hey, hey, it's me, villain!"
"Ugh! Not you again. Get out of my house!" I yelled back.
"Here's a present." He said dreamily.
"Ok, thanks, now GET OUT!" I opened the nicely wrapped gift. I yelled out the window, "C'mon, Big Top! A sweater, really? IT'S THE MIDDLE OF JUNE!"
Afterwards, I decided to 'chat' with Penelope.
"Hi! I am like, so, totally, happy!" I could either say, "Yeah, whats up?" or "Don't talk to me." Of course, I said,
"Yeah, whats up?"
"Have you ever climbed a mountain before?" she asked.
"No... but now that I'm here, I'm sure I can!" I said, for the first time ever, cheerfully.
I walked to the Nook Store, but there was construction. I walked to Able Sisters, but again, there was construction. So I talked to Flurry, Colton, and Penelope, and I attempted to catch a beetle. But instead, I hit Big Top's head. He got really angry and was actually mad at me! So I kept hitting and hitting and hitting and hitting and hitting... until I got sleepy enough to drift into a long nap.
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The Next Day
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Remember that construction that was taking place the other day? Well now, the Nook store is updated and I have Shampoodles (but to be honest, I was more excited about Shampoodles)! So I walked inside the building, and of course, the owner was a poodle.
"Hi, sweetie! Sit on the chair for a hairdo or a makeover!" she said.
"Ok!" I said excitedly.
"Now, sweetie, do you want a more formal look or a casual look?"
"Eh... I think I'll want a sort of casual look." I said.
"Alright, now how clean is your room?"
"Does this even matter? Anyway, my room is messy." I said awkwardly.
"Is it messy on purpose?" she asked.
"Um... I guess its on purpose. And I would like my hair to be... hm... orange? I've always wanted to be a redhead. Now can I tell you what I want you to do with my hair?" I asked impatiently.
"Oh, sweetie, I already decided on your hair!"
"Wait, WHAT?! I didn't pay all my savings for an unexpected haircut?! I payed for just a little trim on my bangs, and I never wante--" Before I could say any more, she put this weird hair thingy on my head, and it started to make sounds that a car would.
"IS THIS SAFE?" I yelled over the annoying hum of the machine.
"Of course, sweetie." she said with joy. The machine got louder and louder and louder... but then it suddenly stopped, and the machine was lifted up over my head, revealing 3 ugly pigtails.
"Thanks, sweetie!" she said happily. "Three pigtails for my sweetie! Now, bye!"
"AAAAAAAHHHHH!!!" I yelled, full of anger. "WHY?!" Then I looked around, realizing that all the animals walking around the city were staring at me. I made a scene.... whoops! I tried to calm my embarrassed self as I walked over to the accessory store to get a hat. Luckily, they had an ugly baseball cap to put over. So I made my way to my house, selling everything I owned except for my green glasses and my bed. I was fairly rich now, so I bought a lot of stuff for my home. I had a decent looking home now, and once again, I was broke.
'Meh, I'll sell the apples in the morning.' I thought as I closed my eyes and drifted to sleep.

Again, I'm always one chapter ahead in Wattpad, so check it out! The next chapter is one of my favorites. :)
 
These short stories are cute! You should make a tumblr and post the chapters there and then post the Link here :) it'd probably make it easier to find the chapters.
 
I'm sorry :( Wattpad is probably the best option, though. It's a great app that you can have on your iPad and other stuff (I sound like a salesman right now lol). ;)
 
Love it! Keep up the awesome work!

All I suggest is breaking everything up into more paragraphs, that way it's easier to read and it isn't just a huge clump of text.
 
Ok! This is my first fanfiction, and I'll need all the tips I can get to become a better writer! Thanks! :D
 
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