davidlblack
hey
i didn't say you suck at anything, i'm just saying you should probably proof read and revise before you post stories online.
Okay. I actually went back a moment ago (before I saw this comment) and fixed some issues with the OP. Story was rushed because I was retyping the original story with more detail and added stuff. I'm also not good with writing stories, I prefer reading them.
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