Price/critque my art that I Made on my phone!

[princesse]

I usually do traditional on the weekdays and digital on the weekends on my dad's computer. However, the thought came to me to draw and color quick drawings on my phone and sell them for cheap :O.
The art thread is here
It was something my little sister requested (it was based off of chocolate cake)

How much do you think it's worth? And what should I work on?

 

[princesse]

Bump!

 

[Chelsaurus]

this is really good! I think you should start off with asking people to submit the price they think first and see what comes up and then after make a firm price?

work on:
Fingers ---> they are hard I cant do them but maybe make them a bit rounded at the end? or the right side one looks a bit too spread out? but the left looks fine to me
It might be the dress but maybe make sure its not too wide when doing other outfits?

The rest I really like particularly her face and hair

It is really good! Id buy one!

 

[Seroja]

Pretty cute I must say. Hmm the fingers need some work. Maybe simplify it more, to make it easier for you since the size is so small. I'd say you should open a gallery before opening a shop to gain more fans.

edit:

I just noticed, you missed her eyebrows ^^

 

[princesse]

this is really good! I think you should start off with asking people to submit the price they think first and see what comes up and then after make a firm price?

work on:
Fingers ---> they are hard I cant do them but maybe make them a bit rounded at the end? or the right side one looks a bit too spread out? but the left looks fine to me
It might be the dress but maybe make sure its not too wide when doing other outfits?

The rest I really like particularly her face and hair

It is really good! Id buy one!

Yes, it's just the dress. I drew the dress and then my sister was like "more poofy!!"

 

[princesse]

Pretty cute I must say. Hmm the fingers need some work. Maybe simplify it more, to make it easier for you since the size is so small. I'd say you should open a gallery before opening a shop to gain more fans.

edit:

I just noticed, you missed her eyebrows ^^

Oh! I added the eyebrows! Her eyebrows are now on fleek! XD and yeah, I totally should work on hands, it was a sad attempt at doing Maka hands :/

 

[Seroja]

Oh! I added the eyebrows! Her eyebrows are now on fleek! XD and yeah, I totally should work on hands, it was a sad attempt at doing Maka hands :/

Oohh yeah she looks so much better now. Also, if you notice, some if not most people don't even draw fingers on their chibis. Have a look around.

 

[princesse]

Oohh yeah she looks so much better now. Also, if you notice, some if not most people don't even draw fingers on their chibis. Have a look around.

Yeah for further notice, I'll probably not have hands until I get better at it

 

[Venn]

Ooo, she's a cutie! And good for art to be done on a phone!

 

[princesse]

Ooo, she's a cutie! And good for art to be done on a phone!

Thank you Venice!

 

[princesse]

Bumping this since there was a tie

 

[princesse]

I feel like it's a tie on purpose

 

[princesse]

Wow