‣ all things nice | WINNERS ANNOUNCED PG 641

hi guys! I was just bored and made this its supposed to be my bunny:
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if i win this im totally treating myself to another hammer collectible
 
I got this person to critique my story, but she's been way too harsh ;_____;

She said that there were loads of grammar mistakes, but all she said was "you said herself instead of her"....that's not loads??? Then she went ahead and spelt things wrong in her actual critique.....like wHAT
 
I got this person to critique my story, but she's been way too harsh ;_____;

She said that there were loads of grammar mistakes, but all she said was "you said herself instead of her"....that's not loads??? Then she went ahead and spelt things wrong in her actual critique.....like wHAT

Wtf, don't listen. It's ok to have one or two grammar mistakes as long as you fix them along the way. What really matters is the actual storyline itself.
 
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Wtf, don't listen. It's ok to have one or two grammar mistakes as long as you fix them along the way. What really matters is the actual storyline itself.

Yeaaah that's the thing though, it's crap.
She wrote a huge paragraph telling me what's wrong with it (which is understandable, as I asked for help with improving my story) but....she's not actually telling me how to do it? Aaaaaah

Thanks though :,D <3
 
im back from the grave
still no wifi just leeching off someone's hotspot hohoho

i really don't know when my wifi is coming back on, the stupid company keeps delaying it ughugh
i can't guarantee the exact dates of the thread re-opening
 
barely!
i would continue the giveaway right now but i want to have it running for at least 2 more days, but i wont have any wifi tomorrow so ugh problems haha ;"((
 
barely!
i would continue the giveaway right now but i want to have it running for at least 2 more days, but i wont have any wifi tomorrow so ugh problems haha ;"((

its ok we still love you!
 
im back from the grave
still no wifi just leeching off someone's hotspot hohoho

i really don't know when my wifi is coming back on, the stupid company keeps delaying it ughugh
i can't guarantee the exact dates of the thread re-opening

Glad to see you're doing okay! :)
 
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