Critique my art! (Digital and Classic + Short blurb x3)

[axo]

Here I have two birds from my "masquerade" set. It's a set of animals that are primarily made of swirls and patterns rather than fur, feathers, and scales. Each animal has a set of 3 colors that represent a certain element. What makes it a "masquerade" is the color specifically on the eyes and face of the animal. Most of the color is on the eye, making it look like a mask. This bird's colors represent fire. I also have a tiger and a lizard but I've been having trouble uploading them. This is the only one I could get.



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And of course one comes out rotated x3 I'll fix that.

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Oh and for those wondering, I drew the digital version on my phone on ibispaint.

 

[Llust]

the drawing looks great c: i just recommend cleaning up the outline a bit and erasing the lines that are out of place or make certain areas too thick compared to others. you could finish it off with a thin sharpie or pen if you'd like, but thats just optional

 

[Bloobloop]

The drawing had a really nice design! I think the lines are a bit shaky on both and the swirls in the digital one seem a little wonky. Still a great drawing, though!

 

[axo]

the drawing looks great c: i just recommend cleaning up the outline a bit and erasing the lines that are out of place or make certain areas too thick compared to others. you could finish it off with a thin sharpie or pen if you'd like, but thats just optional

Thanks! I was planning on outlining, and once I outline I erase the pencil.

The drawing had a really nice design! I think the lines are a bit shaky on both and the swirls in the digital one seem a little wonky. Still a great drawing, though!

Thanks you :3 Yeah the lines are... sloppy xD I've been trying to get my lines to be smooth when I draw on my phone. And now I see what you mean about the swirls, especially the ones by the tail. I will work on fixing that c: