Hi @Dunquixote, You can submit your full entry in a new post. This one won't count as it's only 2 lines.Let’s go Team 3,
Let’s give it our all
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shoot i bumped the post reply by accident before i was done >.< @LadyDestani will this still count?
Hi @Nougat, This is a very cute poem. Unfortunately, it doesn't quite meet the standards of a haiku which is 5 syllables for the first line, 7 syllables for the second line, and 5 syllables again for the last line. If you want to update your poem to the acceptable format and resubmit in a new post or ping me if you edit the old one, I'll be happy to accept it.I'll be cheering on team 3 with a poem!
a win for team three
crown trophy in blue, pink or purple
for the best of lineups
(sorry team, I'm not the best poet...)
Hi @Giddy, This is a wonderful sentiment. Unfortunately, it needs to be a bit longer to be accepted. We're asking for 3 stanzas if you're submitting this as poetry or 250 words if you're submitting it as prose. Please resubmit in a new post or ping me if you edit the old one so I don't miss it.Once I knew I was on Team 3,
I knew this team had greatness~
Our captions, our crew, we have such a couragous spirit!
Everyone always looks for a third option in life, we are that option,
And we have to give it all we got!!
Hi @Zane, This is great! Unfortunately, it needs to be 3 stanzas or verses. If you'd like to update it, please resubmit in a new post or ping me if you edit the old one, and I'll be happy to accept it.Let’s hear it for team 2, green as beans
Green as mighty point-earning machines
Some say we’re the color of money
I say money is the color of us
Hi @Liz!, This is very cute. Unfortunately, it needs to be 3 stanzas for a regular poem or you could cut it down to a haiku (5 syllables, 7 syllables, 5 syllables). If you'd like to update it, please resubmit in a new post or ping me if you edit the old one, and I'll be happy to accept it.I always knew I'd be on team two.
They are the best, better than the rest
Who would have knew we'd win right through.
Oh yeah, come on team two.
Hi @MrBox, very cool acrostic poem and nice use of the word "educe"! Unfortunately, for this style too, we'd like it to be 3 stanzas. You could use TEAM as one stanza and ONE as another, so you'd just need to add one more. If you'd like to update your entry, please resubmit in a new post or ping me if you edit the old one, and I'll be happy to accept it.Let's...
Try our best
Even if we don't win
All will be fine in the end
Most likely not, an absurd thought
Our opponents will have a hard time with our skills
Not if we don't rest though!
Educe your spirit for these two weeks, gamers
Hi @Doo, this is a cute poem. Unfortunately, it's a bit too short and not in the style of haiku (5 syllables, 7 syllables, 5 syllables). If you'd like to update it, please resubmit in a new post or ping me if you edit the old one, and I'll be happy to accept it.Team 1, we’re blue,
We’ll see this through,
We will defeat you!
Thanks so much .I'm all caught up accepting entries for now. If I missed yours and you haven't been quoted below, please let me know!
I do want this to be fun, so I'm trying not to be too strict with the criteria. If I've asked you for updates, please don't feel bad. You're all doing great with so much going on! It's been an exciting few days already!
Hi @Dunquixote, You can submit your full entry in a new post. This one won't count as it's only 2 lines.
Hi @Nougat, This is a very cute poem. Unfortunately, it doesn't quite meet the standards of a haiku which is 5 syllables for the first line, 7 syllables for the second line, and 5 syllables again for the last line. If you want to update your poem to the acceptable format and resubmit in a new post or ping me if you edit the old one, I'll be happy to accept it.
Hi @Giddy, This is a wonderful sentiment. Unfortunately, it needs to be a bit longer to be accepted. We're asking for 3 stanzas if you're submitting this as poetry or 250 words if you're submitting it as prose. Please resubmit in a new post or ping me if you edit the old one so I don't miss it.
Hi @Zane, This is great! Unfortunately, it needs to be 3 stanzas or verses. If you'd like to update it, please resubmit in a new post or ping me if you edit the old one, and I'll be happy to accept it.
Hi @Liz!, This is very cute. Unfortunately, it needs to be 3 stanzas for a regular poem or you could cut it down to a haiku (5 syllables, 7 syllables, 5 syllables). If you'd like to update it, please resubmit in a new post or ping me if you edit the old one, and I'll be happy to accept it.
Hi @MrBox, very cool acrostic poem and nice use of the word "educe"! Unfortunately, for this style too, we'd like it to be 3 stanzas. You could use TEAM as one stanza and ONE as another, so you'd just need to add one more. If you'd like to update your entry, please resubmit in a new post or ping me if you edit the old one, and I'll be happy to accept it.
Hi @Doo, this is a cute poem. Unfortunately, it's a bit too short and not in the style of haiku (5 syllables, 7 syllables, 5 syllables). If you'd like to update it, please resubmit in a new post or ping me if you edit the old one, and I'll be happy to accept it.