The Legend of Zelda: Viliatris Strikes

[Bulerias]

Your a good writer.

Thank you. Chapter 10 is finally flowing better. If I want to write something good, it has to flow seamlessly, and not be a chore.

 

[Bastoise99]

When do you think it'll be ready?

 

[Bulerias]

When do you think it'll be ready?

i'm going at break-neck speed, so maybe even today.

 

[Bastoise99]

Cool.

 

[Bulerias]

Chapter 10

 

[Bastoise99]

good! I liked this line:'masterful sword-master' That made me laugh. Anyways, i can't blelieve the king is dead. Or is he? that was funny viliatris was vanished. He lost.

 

[Bulerias]

good! I liked this line:'masterful sword-master' That made me laugh. Anyways, i can't blelieve the king is dead. Or is he? that was funny viliatris was vanished. He lost.

Some definite things -

The King is dead. He won't come back.
Viliatris was sent to a Death Portal, and will eventually break free.

 

[Bulerias]

Now then, before I write Chapter 11, I'd like to know which Chapter all of my readers found the best. Everyone, post your favorite chapter! And say why you liked it.

 

[Bastoise99]

Very hard to decide....probably trhis last one. (not because I didn't read the earlier ones) It was pretty suspenseful and kept me guessing as I read it. 'would viliatris kill link? would link kill viliatris? would link ever see his companions agan? would jorgito still be alive?'

 

[Bulerias]

Very hard to decide....probably trhis last one. (not because I didn't read the earlier ones) It was pretty suspenseful and kept me guessing as I read it. 'would viliatris kill ]
Yeah, I love leaving questions at the end, and suspensful endings.

Current Standings -

1st - Chapter 10

 

[Mino]

I'm going to have to agree with Bastoise...

 

[Bulerias]

I'm going to have to agree with Bastoise...

Did you excpect the King to be killed?

 

[Bastoise99]

No. I thought they were going to meet the king and he would help slay viliatris.

 

[Bulerias]

No. I thought they were going to meet the king and he would help slay viliatris.

Ha! You thought that this was the end... it's nowhere near the end.... I'll robably finish it by Chapter 70 or so...

 

[Mino]

I'm going to have to agree with Bastoise...

Did you excpect the King to be killed?

Nope, I thought he'd live...

 

[Bulerias]

I love suddenly doing something drastic.




So yeah... any ideas on who the figure is?

 

[Bastoise99]

Which figure?

 

[Mino]

Agahnim!

 

[Mino]

No wait... Ganondorf!

 

[Bulerias]

Which figure?

The one that blocked their way at the end.