debinoresu
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Username: debinoresu
Role? artist (if needed) and editor
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Incorrect paragraph: (taken from some worksheet pdf lmao)
At the start of school Dora was afrad of her new Teacher. Mrs. Davis seamed nice, but she had so manny rules for the class to folow. Scare someone to pieces. As the school year cotinued, Dora begun to understan how the Teacher come up with the rules The rules were their so students would be respecful of theyselves and each other. By the end of the year, Dora though Mrs. Davis was the best Teacher she evere had!
Edited paragraph:
When school first started, Dora was afraid of her new teacher. Mrs. Davis seemed nice, but she had an abundance of rules for the class to follow. It scared them to pieces! However, as the school year continued, Dora began to understand how the teacher decided on the rules. The rules were there so the students would be respectful of themselves and one another. By the end of the year, Dora thought Mrs. Davis was the best teacher she'd ever had!
i will change words and punctuation i feel fit better, fix grammar mistakes, general editor stuff
Role? artist (if needed) and editor
Paid or volunteer work? paid
Example? recent commission i did and as for editing
Incorrect paragraph: (taken from some worksheet pdf lmao)
At the start of school Dora was afrad of her new Teacher. Mrs. Davis seamed nice, but she had so manny rules for the class to folow. Scare someone to pieces. As the school year cotinued, Dora begun to understan how the Teacher come up with the rules The rules were their so students would be respecful of theyselves and each other. By the end of the year, Dora though Mrs. Davis was the best Teacher she evere had!
Edited paragraph:
When school first started, Dora was afraid of her new teacher. Mrs. Davis seemed nice, but she had an abundance of rules for the class to follow. It scared them to pieces! However, as the school year continued, Dora began to understand how the teacher decided on the rules. The rules were there so the students would be respectful of themselves and one another. By the end of the year, Dora thought Mrs. Davis was the best teacher she'd ever had!
i will change words and punctuation i feel fit better, fix grammar mistakes, general editor stuff