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Hi everyone! I did these picture awhile back in photoshop and let me tell you, I am no expert and I am not the greatest at drawing ok lol

Anyways I wanted some opinions on these drawings I did. I really wish I was better at drawing but here they are...

first_snow_by_alessyaveronica-d5nipjk.jpg


amy_in_the_snow_by_alessyaveronica-d4jaqxs.jpg
 
Very nice. I don't own a tablet, so I couldn't make images like these on the computer. :p

In the first picture, the arms are a little out of proportion, and your drawing style is a little wider than normal. But I like it nevertheless. You're very talented. :)

EDIT: Just some more advice, when you continue to improve, try to draw your characters at an angel, so you can create depth. The first character has a flat body because you didn't draw her from a particular perspective. The second character had more depth, and I thought that was better. :cool:
 
they're cute, the first one is better though
 
thanks for the opinions guys! and yes I agree the first pic looked flat lol and I didn't use a tablet to draw these. I drew them on paper first then scanned them to my computer and coloured in photoshop because I'm HORRIBLE at drawing on a computer!
 
!!! I know you! i was talking to you on dA! i added the first picture to my favs. i really like it. The only tiny problem is the lines, they are a bit gray and fuzzy. The 2nd ones lines are great though!
 
!!! I know you! i was talking to you on dA! i added the first picture to my favs. i really like it. The only tiny problem is the lines, they are a bit gray and fuzzy. The 2nd ones lines are great though!

OMG ACTUALLY?!?! I never knew that ahaha but thanks for adding it to your favs <3 and yea i know the lines ain't so great lol
 
Very cute drawings :3
The main problem that I see are with the proportions, which can be helped by drawing models, using drawing tutorials, and/or by trying to copy other people's drawings... of course, if you use the third option, you shouldn't post the drawings online, especially if the drawings are very similar. The original artist would probably be a bit mad if they were to find out :I also, if you use stock images that someone made, you should credit them if you can...
When I started drawing, I mostly used tutorials online and then for things that I wasn't so good at drawing (like hands or feet) I would use myself as a reference.
You don't have to use any of my suggestions, but those are just the things that I would do. Regardless of how you choose to improve your drawings, practice makes perfect :3
Can't wait to see more if you choose to post them~
 
They're both nice. I personally prefer the one of Amy.

There are some places where the gradients/shading is a little awkward. For example in the first one, the snow and the girl's skirt look a little strange with that shading. Otherwise, good job :)
 
Thanks for the advice guys! I know shading and proportion is definitely not my thing LOL but thanks a lot for the feedback! :D oh and I drew the animal crossing one before Christmas I think and the Amy rose one last year for those of you wondering :)
 
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