Critique wanted {fixed the link} [reused thread]

[Bloody_House]

Plz critique dis non-chibi drawing I just drew.
ignore dis plz

 

[chapstick]

Oooo the crazy is cute ummm maybe do some freebies to start and get in some nice practice, and then that style could really sell

 

[meowduck]

I like both!! i'd pay at least 30tbt for one c: (not great with prices) but if you do open your shop I'd love a doodle c:

 

[Bloody_House]

Oooo the crazy is cute ummm maybe do some freebies to start and get in some nice practice, and then that style could really sell

I like the crazy one better too~ Oh I think I did freebies long time ago... I also have a shop that I almost forgot about and I'm not planning to sell art in this style, I'm just curious

 

[jiny]

aw the crazy version is really cute

i'd say around 20-40. it's better than mine aha

 

[meowduck]

Is your shop still active then?

 

[Bloody_House]

Is your shop still active then?

Yep~

- - - Post Merge - - -

I should stop adding ~ everywhere

 

[Venn]

I think you could go a little more. Maybe around 50, or even 75..
I would even order at least 2 of them in that first style

 

[Bloody_House]

-Ignore-

 

[meowduck]

Oh then I might just open another shop xD

Open!! open!!

 

[Bloody_House]

Open!! open!!

I will, after I close my current shop

 

[Bloody_House]

Beep! Reusing a thread!

 

[Mega_Cabbage]

The lines are kinda messy, you should work on making single, longer lines instead of multiple short, scratchy lines for the final product (it's ok if you are just sketching though). You should also make either the torso bigger or the head smaller. The tie is also too small/short. Ties are supposed to hang down around the belly button area. I'm not entirely sure how to critique the clothes since I can't really tell whether it's supposed to be a cape/cloak like thing or a jacket that you haven't added sleeves to yet...

 

[Bloody_House]

The lines are kinda messy, you should work on making single, longer lines instead of multiple short, scratchy lines for the final product (it's ok if you are just sketching though). You should also make either the torso bigger or the head smaller. The tie is also too small/short. Ties are supposed to hang down around the belly button area. I'm not entirely sure how to critique the clothes since I can't really tell whether it's supposed to be a cape/cloak like thing or a jacket that you haven't added sleeves to yet...

I always make my lines scratchy and messy tho i make them straight later on. Oh then i'll close this thread then open after i'm done