TBT 2009

[Dark Mirage]

when your done im gonna have to edit this whole thing into a nice microsoft word fomat to make it all book like you know maybe use some edwardian script on the first letter on the first page of the first chapter so i can make it a story book and read it before i go to bed ........ nah but i might make it into a word format and make it so you guys can paste it to your word and print it ... maybe thats a big maybe

 

[Gabby]

* Reads* Nice chapter.You are a good story making kind of person.

 

[Tyler]

Book 1, Chapter 6: Nsider Gate
"So you ready to rot in Nsider's Prison?" Bulerias asked. "Bul... What happened. In the old days when the war wasn't existing?" I asked. Bul walked away and had me and Ultra locked up in chains. We were than dragged off to Nsider prison.

I was in one of those drifts again. This time I was in The Chamber of the Seven Sages. I was walking across the room. There were even people there but they couldn't see or hear me. It was freaky. Than out of nowhere I was in Storm's Office with Ultra. Once again they didn't see me.

"So Ultrabyte, do you know where Sporge went?" said Storm. "No... I wish I did. Sporge was the best," she replied. "You do know that there is something fishy going on with Odd." "Yea he hasn't been acting to normal." "Yea Yea Yea.... Well I want you do give Odd this....." Poof I was gone. What ever had happened that Storm pushed her down the steps she fell with something I don't know. Is that bad or good?

I woke up in a cell in Power-On I think and man Nsider has went down hill. Posters of

 

[Furry Sparks]

bomb bomb-omb

Whats with the random italics? >_>

 

[Gabby]

That was a awsome chapter.

 

[Tyler]

bomb bomb-omb

Whats with the random italics? >_>

It's cause my computer won't let me type some words. So I have to put some code in between words. It's just weird like that. >_>

 

[Trent the Paladin]

^_^ Nice!

 

[Tyler]

Book 1, Chapter 7: No More Time
I took my PDA out because it was flashing. "You have 1 unread PM." the PDA said. I wondered who it was from. I clicked it and a little window came up.

Personal Message
Fanghorn
Re:Sporge Dec 12 2008, 06:53 PM Delete? Quote? Fwd?_________________________________________________

Thanks Fang.

Sure why not.

Hey Fang, It's Odd. Can I ask you a favor? Watch Smart in Bunker Z. He has some sort of illness and I'm out to get the remedy.

Odd bad news. Storm found out and he isn't to happy. He's threatening Smart so I need to try and stop him! >_<

"Great...." I said as I showed the message to Bulerias. "Hrmm....," he said. "Well your going to need help. You have only one choice if you want to get out. You may not like it either." "What?" I asked. "Let's just worry about getting out, ok," Bulerias replied.

We both got out to Nsider Gate. "There's nothing I can do for you here Odd," Bulerias said. "What about Ultrabyte?" I said. "Odd, I'm sorry to break it to you but Ultra needs to stay here if you want to save Smart," Bul Stopped. "I'm trying to say if Andy finds out about Ultra escaping he will send as massive army back to TBT. You have no choice what so ever. You must leave her." "Ok....."

Getting out of Nsider wasn't that hard but I fainted on the way back to TBT. I woke up once again but I was in a small camp called Ac4Life. No one could see me or anything. I needed help. What kind of bazaar place did I keep entering? In no time I was nowhere. I needed help. I couldn't breath. There was no light. Than I saw Sporge floating like a monk.

To be Continued

 

[Gabby]

I love it, love it, love it,!


:wub:

 

[SL92]

Wow =O Sporge be floatin.

 

[Trent the Paladin]

Wow, this great.

 

[Sporge27]

Ohhhhh so my meditating and martial arts will pay off!

 

[Gabby]

I love these make more make more!

 

[IslandGuy]

Another masterpiece...another set of thumbs up.

 

[Gabby]

like i said it is good.

 

[UltraByte]

Just curious, how come I have to stay with Bul?

 

[SL92]

Just a writing thing, OddCrazyMe, it sounds better if you don't end a chapter with a simile. (comparision)

 

[Tyler]

[quote="Shadow_] Just a writing thing, OddCrazyMe, it sounds better if you don't end a chapter with a simile. (comparision) [/quote]
NVm... I thought you said smile. >_<

In other news I am formating this like a real book, paragraphs correctly, popper grammar fixes and pages that will be available to download soon.

 

[UltraByte]

Sweet.

But you never did answer my question... <_<

 

[Tyler]

Well as I wrote it I thought that it would kind of be like Sporge where it's not the last time I'll ever see him which I will in the next chapter more. So you'll probably be back in the story soon.